Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray
krostovikraven1 chapter 36 . 3/6/2013
man! so you go thru the detailed foreplay and just stopped cold turkey. thats just cruel. i mean c'mon. i know the website's limiting writters to mainly teen apropiate but still. but i've read other stories that are actually very detailed in a scene like that. idk how far they would have to go for the website to actually shut them down but they got the whole scene down. anyway. otherthan the screeching halt of the mental forplay,i'de say this chapter is incredible. and yes . i double pinky swear i'm old enough to read as such... XD
krostovikraven1 chapter 35 . 3/6/2013
wooow... and by the way, the beast on the last chapter was incredible. pure animal instinct. so simple, yet deep. "mine. not of story" attitude. i liked that.
krostovikraven1 chapter 34 . 3/6/2013
that is defitnaly a keeper
krostovikraven1 chapter 33 . 3/6/2013
another evil cliffhanger... grrrrr
krostovikraven1 chapter 32 . 3/6/2013
curse you evil cliffhanger!
krostovikraven1 chapter 31 . 3/6/2013
ewww indeed. vivid imagination is not very satisfying at times like this.
krostovikraven1 chapter 30 . 3/6/2013
lol...good!, i'm glad Cyborg got to that douche before he tried to get to Raven again.
also, that word "great googlimoogli" lol... i think i heard it from Major Monogram in Phineas and Pherb but, i heard it on monster's ink. Mike's girlfriend calles him that (without the "Great") when he wishes her a happy birthday.
oh, and for parties...? actually, for a moment i thought you minght use the idea from "never say never" from Coeus. its also a halloween party but it hilarious. and the costumes well described too. the one that Raven ends up with its just unbelievable. if you havent, check it out. idk about you but it had me rolling over in laughter with real tears in my eyes. i really recomend it.
bailey chapter 55 . 3/5/2013
That was an amazing chapter. I love your work and hope to see a new chapter soon
krostovikraven1 chapter 28 . 3/5/2013
that was a great party. loved the entrances. so dramatic.
krostovikraven1 chapter 27 . 3/5/2013
im going into hysterics from anticipation. you can sure build up the thrill.
krostovikraven1 chapter 26 . 3/5/2013
that is the most detailed insight of a girl drama.
krostovikraven1 chapter 23 . 3/5/2013
very clever of cyborg to do just that. the devils and angels bit was funny. dang! she was so drunk even her good angel was passed out hahahah... sweet of BB not to take advantage.
krostovikraven1 chapter 20 . 3/4/2013
i read "deadpan love" a few months ago and thought it was sweet and funny. now, the way you added it to your story it makes the whole thing to mke better sense. not that it wasnt right on its own, but with the flow you have going on, it just had to be there even if it was reinvented from scratch.
krostovikraven1 chapter 19 . 3/4/2013
well, style consultants can very well be psychologist. one look and they can tell you where you've been in detail. its creepy.
krostovikraven1 chapter 17 . 3/4/2013
I liked Cyborg's and Changeling's conversation. very mature. and with Rita, that was very insightful. impresive how out of the goofy, inmature changeling, he's respected and looked up to. true, the son of a reach man, adopted or not. but still, impresive.
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