|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| Kellygirl6754 chapter 37 . 10/20/2012
Yes I am over 18 and I have been trying to find the lemon and no matter what I can not find it. So could you please send me the lemon.
| Harrassle chapter 36 . 10/20/2012
When I was reading the lemon, I thought it was really obnoxious. The tease was funny as hell, but still annoying. And I can agree with a previous comment, to an extent. As a woman, when I read this stuff I expect it to be "fluffier", especially when its a couple's fist time together.I do recognize the benefit of something more savage. I'm just not sure if you exactly hit it with your female readers. Maybe its a guy/girl speak thing and maybe it is just me.
| Lady Blackwolf chapter 36 . 10/19/2012
I read your lemon, and it was very good. :) Im glad you found a place to showcase it, and before you get all nervous yes Im over 18.
| dylanbiancamano chapter 37 . 10/19/2012
boy howdy do you have a mind in your skull. there were some points of this thing where i was thinking, wow, you really thought this through didn't you. where as the Lemon and butter sauce (that's what i call the aqua lad sex scene) was just kind of raunchy, this one was down right X rated, i understand why you didn't want to put this one up on this web site. and don't worry, if any one tries to sue you for peddling smut to kids, I'll testify for you difference, if any one comes at you with a shot gun, well then your on your own, i may like ya, but i sure as shit ain't bullet proof. update soon and update often and thank you for writing.
| Zeta Marz chapter 29 . 10/19/2012
Well I already sent you an email (btw is it ) and I haven't heard from you all day, and to repeat my email, yes I am over 18 years and I double dog pinky swear on it, so please give me URL for the Lmon, thank you.
| Guest chapter 29 . 10/19/2012
Totally wanted to read the lemon buuut didn't want to email you. Because you know of privacy yata yata yata.
So I went looking for that infamous lemon. I solemnly swear I am over age! Lol.
I have to say it took longer than I expected so I applaud you for that.
Unfortunately all the gwow yum yum gumball stuff was missing.
It was a GOOD lemon don't get me wrong. But I wanted more fluff. Not exactly smutt. For those of us that CAN read your lemon legally, well were not exactly virgins (at least I think so, or should I say I hope so) Maybe its a girl (because yah I'm a girl )thing, but we want passionate blow your mind bow chika bow wow. Idk it felt very well thought out...
As changeling said "Stop thinking. Turn over "
| RosesAreRed201 chapter 37 . 10/19/2012
pls may i have the lemon i dont know how to get it! meh pls! tell me how pls! thanks! it an awesome story btw! :)
| Dizzy chapter 37 . 10/19/2012
I am pleased.
| Shadico chapter 37 . 10/19/2012
Guys, he posted the website it's hosted at in the first lemon. Just look for it, lmao.
Also, Lamont. Lamont my good man, where do I send the vodka? That lemon...jesus christ. you are a god among men. Keep up the DAMN good work.
| CurlyBookWriter94 chapter 37 . 10/19/2012
Where is it posted omg
| nikki14091 chapter 37 . 10/19/2012
I'm 18. Send the URL please
| Dragonkyng chapter 36 . 10/19/2012
Yay! So happy! Please keep writing.
Also I'm 22 I swear. Can I read the lemon?
| c1c2c3c4 chapter 36 . 10/18/2012
Awesome! Does that mean Raven and Changeling are dating?
| Chowbo chapter 36 . 10/18/2012
To a degree yes but there are always chances for something unexpected. One could be that an enemy attacked the city so Changling had to run to his room naked and ran into any of the others while coming out of Raven's room. Sorry these are the things I see happening when left like that. Oh and this chapter was really good too, keep it up.
| Kringeline chapter 36 . 10/17/2012
I've known that girl 4 or 5 years now. She doesn't need luck. The fight scenes were awkward in your writing, but Ch.35 just felt like a severely awkward situation when I first read it. After Ch.36 it doesn't matter. That was awesome.