|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| Wind Lane chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
I think we missed a step somewhere. Last chapter had Raven going into his room in a drunken stupor, now this one says she's never been.
There also seems to be a lot of story between last chapter and this one missing. Plus you didn't use your normal pre-start-of-chapter thing using the classic tag-line from the original radio shows.
There's this niggling little thought that this is all some kind of dream thing and that the waking up happens next chapter, but that feels a little...flat...for how this story has been progressing.
| Hairul The Nightrage Beast chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
WTF happened with this chapter?
| Dizzy chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
Oh and don't worry about getting nasty on here, I mean you should read the straight pornos being posted under Twilight. And as for parents.. the story is rated M so if there are problems its with their kids (all ages under 17), not you.
| Anon chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
The fuck was that?
| LadyFelton1994 chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
What he left again?! What's up with that huh?!
| shingi echidna chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
plz tell me this isnt what i think it is?
| Dizzy chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
Damn... Where the hell did this chapter come from?! Everythings cool, he helped her with the hangover, Cyborg was gonna check Aqualad out, then... this? Oh my goodness why?! I wanted Changling around to kick Aqualad's ass when he breaks Raven's heart! I know you wanted him to mature but to completely leave? Really!? You want us to hate you, don't you? Are you trying to test us? Weed out those who wont stay faithful? Ima stick around, but know this chapter achieved the goal of completely pissing me off.
| Aqua Rules chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
Well we are all entitled to our opinions no matter how ridiculous they may seem to others. Sorry to break it to you but the friend zone is a real thing as I'm sure many people can attest to. Talking from a male perspective, you still want to be friends with the woman but you also want to distance yourself a little to avoid stirring up leftover feelings for that person and force yourself to move on. I respect the fact that Beast Boy is being honest with Raven and not making it seem like he is completely ok with the situation. Please update soon.
| Alister Nightfoot chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
I'm lost. Doesn't follow off the last chapter. Is this like...a preview? Because I don't particularily like it. Just saying.
| Thowell3 chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
Is this apart of the current story, I am sort of lost where this came from.
| NicoletteSchmidt chapter 23 . 9/26/2012
Ahh Cyborg. Gotta love him.
I love how Raven still calls him Beast Boy, even though he changed it to Changeling. I just find it cute, I don't know.
I'm pretty sure I've said it before, but I'll say it again: I hate Aqualad and his jerkiness. However, I know he's getting what's coming to him. Loved this chapter, and can't wait for the next.
| theluckyshot chapter 23 . 9/26/2012
Gotta love that Cyborg. Anyway... I can see where this is going. Next few chapters are gonna be interesting to say the least. Let me tell ya though you sure are making fish-boy out to be a major scum-bag. Eh, at least your doing it realistically. Can't wait to see what occurs next, don't keep me hanging. As for your issue... posting 'that' chapter off FF is probably best. For your benefit there is an adult FF site which is the sister site for stories which tend to be a bit more shall we say racey. You can post the chapter there with no consequence if you're as worried as you seem.
| dylanbiancamano chapter 23 . 9/26/2012
this chapter, i like it, ANOTHER
| Katwizzle chapter 23 . 9/26/2012
she better not lose her virginity to Aqualad! She needs to break up with him and get with Beast boy!
| Hotaru chapter 22 . 9/26/2012
All of the "you're making me hate Raven!" comments are ridiculous. I'm sorry but, if anything, it's Beast Boy and Starfire that are being the asshats here. First of all, the entire concept of the "friend zone" is gross. A woman's friendship is not a consolation prize, and if you're not okay with just being friends after she has explained that she feels nothing for you romantically, then you weren't her friend to begin with. Period. The fact that Starfire is conspiring behind Raven's back is also gross, and if one of my female friends ever did that, we wouldn't be friends anymore. I don't care if she thinks it's for a good cause, it's underhanded and rude. On top of all that, I think you're making Raven extremely naive. Even if her emotional growth is stunted, she is easily the most knowledgeable of the Titans, and an empath on top of that. I just think she'd pick up on a lot more than she has.