Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray
shugokage chapter 33 . 10/12/2012
Very good chapter and battle strategy by Immortus!
Matoi27 chapter 33 . 10/12/2012
I was wondering if u could explain to me whats been happening from chapter 29 to 33... i kinda stoped understanding after the one of the halloween party lol
dylanbiancamano chapter 33 . 10/12/2012
the joker's wild, look all I'm saying is read it all the way through and if you still feel that same way then i'll drop it, but trust me, it's not at all slow to start and though the dialog can be choppy at times, it's all truly fantastic, consider it a recommendation from a friend. also on the topic of this story, i think ending this many chapters with cliff hangers should be illegal.
Shadico chapter 33 . 10/12/2012
In regards to your Author note this chapter, it isn't that we've grown uninterested, it's just that the lack of almost any BBRAE kind of forces a reaction of 'Ah, ok. So this is what's happening now. Can't wait for the next chapter!' instead of the usual torrent of 'FUCK YES! WRITE FASTER! MORE FLUFF!'

The writing is great, the action scenes are fine (seriously, you're writing them perfectly. Enough detail, but not over-saturation. keep it up.), and you're being a bit hard on yourself. People, like myself, just aren't as inclined to reread these action chapters while we wait for the next chapter to release, unlike the numerous times i've re-read the fluffier chapters in anticipation of the next. Cause I mean, cmon. BBRAE fluff has got to be the most addictive drug known to man.

We're all just waiting for some more BBRAE _

That all being said, I can't wait to see what kind of haxxy shenanigans Cy can pull on ole' monkey butt. That, and well, BB playing defender for Rae and vice versa always makes me fist pump while reading. D
Dragonkyng chapter 33 . 10/11/2012
Oh God! Please update soon, I'm on the edge of my toilet.
Matoi27 chapter 12 . 10/11/2012
I kinda like the goofy beast boy alot more lol
Matoi27 chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
I just loved this chapter xD
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 32 . 10/11/2012
in your next chapter, if you want, I can post a review on how to do some action scenes that might improve what your attempting to do.
RavenFan chapter 32 . 10/10/2012
This overall is awesome... I only am able to watch the teen titan cartoon and your story ruined aqualad for me... But I've always seen him as a "playah" . I've never read the comics so now I'm wondering if your story has part of the comics mix in it.. namely the events like when raven and changeling was in the cave and the halloween party... I don't know if you are still writing this as I am new to the fanfiction site and I really am hoping you still are... If so keep it up :D
RandomDalmatian326 chapter 32 . 10/10/2012
Oh, nice!

Welcome to the world of writing, where everything actually takes time.
Good chapter.
Good fight scene. (They're really hard, aren't they?)
Nice little convo between Raven and Changeling.
You can always PUT feelings into fight scenes, you know.
dylanbiancamano chapter 32 . 10/10/2012
great chapter, and on the subject of the other story, ha, haha, hahahahahahah, muahahahahaah, you want pathos, oh ye of little faith, keep reading, you'll get your pathos.
Huntress of the Shadows chapter 32 . 10/10/2012
Nooooo! They caant die! I refuse it! Wheres Aqualad? Not that I mind if hes been eaten or transformed, not at all. Anyway, sorry I didnt review the other chapters, I havent been on in a while. So, update this as soon as possible, or Ill sic Larry and his magic finger on you! *opens alternate dimension portale*
JOHNXgambit chapter 32 . 10/10/2012
BB (pinches his nose) did I do that, Raven drop kicks him WRONG URKEL. good chapter it has the we're all going to die feel to it like a good zombie movie should
Lady Blackwolf chapter 32 . 10/9/2012
I must say you are now my favorite person for the Serenity quote. X) well done!
Hairul The Nightrage Beast chapter 32 . 10/9/2012
Desperate times call for despeate measures, time to drop in the Big Guns of the XXXG-01H2 Gundam Heavyarms Kai.
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