Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray
JOHNXgambit chapter 26 . 9/28/2012
Okay changling I need u to do me a favor for this round, I need u to RUN don't worry about points we'll catch up later but right now this chick could punch an engine box out the back end of an airplane. So stay out of her range and run kid
guest chapter 25 . 9/28/2012
how could you do that...
The Fat Lantern chapter 25 . 9/28/2012
Mr. Allard,

I would like to first congratulate you on your incredible story thus far, it has not yet failed to deliver a good read. I also appreciate the fact that you take time to dutifully respond to those who review and even go through all of the trouble of cross-posting to another site just to give your readers a complete story experience.

The sun is shining.

The Fat Lantern
theluckyshot chapter 26 . 9/27/2012
You just enjoy proving my terrible predictions right, don't ya? Anyway, despite my seemingly horrid cynicism I must say that I am enjoying the story. Mind you I don't really get off on emotional angst... I'm actually quite an up-beat person. However, the ups and downs of the story only make it more realistic (At least as far as a romance between supperheros goes) and interesting to read.

Omeganian chapter 26 . 9/27/2012
Have you considered adultfanfiction net? There, the age is asked for when entering, so it won't be your problem.
dylanbiancamano chapter 26 . 9/27/2012
you sir are in for a storm of angry reviews, but not from me. i for one love how you have written this story, all of the characters action are believable and natural. i actually like that raven lost her . . . well you know, to aqua-lad, not the actual act in fact the thought of her and that scaly SOB together makes me want to throw trash in to the nearest lake, but it puts raven and changeling on the same level so to speak, one does not have something over the other in terms of relationship, as well as it gives raven some wisdom for her troubles. perhaps that's not the right words but hopefully you get what i mean. furthermore, you should not fear peoples reactions to a supposed lemon, this is an M rated piece, you have advertised this, you warned them that there could be explicit sexual content, if they didn't listen then that's just user error. in addition, to all of the "your making me hate raven", come on, no ones making you hate anything, your just pissed because you don't like it, but that's cool, but you should really let the story unfold, believe in the story, you might be surprised. on what Hotaru said, well the concept of unrequited love has existed since, well forever, and i can tell you from experience that it hurts, a lot, is it truly "gross" to try and change a persons mind about another person, especially if you trying to make them realize that they could make each other vary happy, sometimes people arrive at a conclusion them selves, but some times, however you may not like it, you have to be dragged to that conclusion for your own good. again i hope I'm saying this right, my thoughts have a way of getting away from me, as shown evident by the short essay i just wrote about this. oh well. in summation, thank you for writing, thank you for being good at it, and thank you for existing. peace out.
St Rhon chapter 26 . 9/27/2012
Very nice! Much better than "Beast Boy rides off into the sunset". (Aww man! That would've been a perfect moment for a "Gone with the Wind" quote! "Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn." *credits roll* well assuming you ignore the rest of the scene...)

I enjoyed how chap 25 and half of 26 appeared to be the calm before the storm that was the release of a good amount of emotional turmoil via dark energy and screams of rage/pain. Gotta say Starfire is really working overtime this fic tho

And for some reason even though all the Bat...males appear obtuse I can't help but think that the whole "clean up and leave behind an offering of tribute" plan is a bat family contingency for the "Barbara has a bad date" scenario. Ha.

But in all seriousness that was the only solution unless the male titans had the desire to be defenestrated. Though I wonder if Raven is gonna realize whats been laying in front of her before BB decides to try out Star's "make Raven jealous" idea. I hope not :3
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 26 . 9/27/2012
So, first off, thankyou for the headsup.
Secondly, damn it.
Thirdly, that wasn't an unbearable read. I actually think it was more effective that way then a lemon would have been. It perfectly described the detached manner in which Raven was conducting herself.

Advice as a writer. This is the actual review.
When a half demon loses control, and unleashes a magical shit storm because her emotions just got released, it should be described in an intense manner. Devote more time describing the sheer terror that that event should invoke. Just an idea. Good work, I wasn't horrendously alienated from the story. Keep it up.
shugokage chapter 26 . 9/27/2012
Great chapters and good break down scene for Raven and comfort by Starfire!
LamontCranston chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
Sorry for the chaos. That wasn't a chapter, and didn't belong here. I got inspired by something from the reviews and wrote a vignette around a really slick turn of phrase. Late and night, I posted on automatic pilot and stuck it here out of habit. It's been moved to it's own story, Endgame for Hotaru, and this space will return to it's regularly scheduled fantasy romance tomorrow. That is, if I can fix it.

Raven just decided to exterminate all humanity because it was less work that taking out the Citadel, the Gordian Empire, and the Empire of the Skrulls. And that's a little over the top, even for her. I'm going to have to talk her out if it and it may take an extra day or so.

"Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men?"

"I do." - Lamont Cranston
Wind Lane chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
I think we missed a step somewhere. Last chapter had Raven going into his room in a drunken stupor, now this one says she's never been.

There also seems to be a lot of story between last chapter and this one missing. Plus you didn't use your normal pre-start-of-chapter thing using the classic tag-line from the original radio shows.

There's this niggling little thought that this is all some kind of dream thing and that the waking up happens next chapter, but that feels a little...flat...for how this story has been progressing.
Hairul The Nightrage Beast chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
WTF happened with this chapter?
Dizzy chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
Oh and don't worry about getting nasty on here, I mean you should read the straight pornos being posted under Twilight. And as for parents.. the story is rated M so if there are problems its with their kids (all ages under 17), not you.
Anon chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
The fuck was that?
CurlyBookWriter94 chapter 24 . 9/27/2012
What he left again?! What's up with that huh?!
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