Reviews for The Hero and the Veela
redeyehawk23 chapter 16 . 8/23
This story was good up until the end of the 3rd task. I just kinda became pure angst at that point and the repeated the same thing over and over again.
mrs moonie chapter 7 . 7/11
Love the story but in a previous chapter didn't you say Remus did the lycan treatment and it was a success, now you say in this chapter he vetoed it because of greyback?
Fellbane chapter 14 . 6/15
The major angst and moodiness of Harry is extremely tough to get through. He claims to not care for his injuries and would do it again without hesitation because he was able to save Fleur's life yet he spends every waking moment since being injured, moping about it and snapping at everyone who cares for him. Frankly, it's exhausting to read and not very fun at all.
MysticOak chapter 13 . 6/11
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EZChunka chapter 2 . 6/4
Who run Bartertown?
HoneyBear84 chapter 20 . 3/17
Loved it
Lordlexx chapter 16 . 3/1
I honestly can't see how Harry isn't the one in the wrong here. Like nearly everything since he came back has being nothing but him being an angsty little shit and lashing out at people that are trying to care for him and misunderstanding literally everything that is being said.
Adagietto932 chapter 5 . 2/13
i cant make it through this, explanation after explanation about grey dark neutral with no real plot relevance. had me in the first half tho
jaqmaq77 chapter 11 . 12/8/2021
Ok... brilliant story, but that was just bad writing...
"Dobby, take Fleur to safety and come back for me, after I've been tortured for a while..."

"Oh, I'm ugly now and nobody will love me so I'm going to run away like a coward." (Oh, woe is me... woe, woe and thrice woe - I'll just go and cry in my beer.)
Jimbocous chapter 19 . 10/28/2021
Thanks for a great (re)read! Very nicely done.
abhibadanna chapter 20 . 9/9/2021
brilliant read
Lordlexx chapter 11 . 6/6/2021
And now there's mutilation...
Lordlexx chapter 2 . 6/5/2021
Its actually painful to read a Harry like this. Authors having Hermione pretty much pull a Ron in GoF era fics is just piss poor writing and a bullshit way of getting rid of Hermione in their stories for no really good reason. You've even portrayed her as a teachers pet and authority suckup which isn't even her character in the first place. At least not by book 4.

I really wanted to like this story because Harry/Gabrielle is my 2nd favorite pairing and there are so few lengthy stories for them.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2021
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2021
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