I got as far as I could. Once you got to the graveyard, things went stupid. SAS training would have never allowed for Fluer to trip over her own feet or anyone else's. Also, if she had tripped, it would have turned into a roll. Then you just disregarded all the foreshadowing you did of Harry and Fluer knowing it was a trap.

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story.

Thank you for writing it.

oh come on, 3/4 down and Hermione spent more time with Harry and in his bed than Gabby. Every chapter you say she is gonna come back and be more present and every time it doesnt happen. dont take it personally im just venting but damn that is frustrating. Story is still really great but too frustrating. In a way im glad it isnt a 400k words story or I fear what it would have been like.

I have to say i'm a bit disappointed, i started reading this story for the HpGd but it seems she has even less screen time than Draco did in the movies. We'll see how it goes but considering you said it wasn't a soul bond and there would be a relationship building, and we're almost half way through it and they have talked to each other like, twice, i have to say it's a bit frustrating. Story is great tho but I find myself skipping a lot of parts of it because i cbb with Minerva, Amelia and Augusta, and they are more present than Gabby..

I must say I am impressed if this is what you consider no bashing I am glad I did not waste my time reading any of your other stories because wow.

Great story

Ron, as usual, never REALLY apologized. He generally gives half-arsed apologies when he gives them at all. In this chapter, he pretty much said HE saved Harry. I’ve never thought Ron was much of a friend. Neville is a much better friend.

Hermione’s and Ginny’s treatment of Harry was very surprising, because both have been saved by Harry in the past. It will be interesting to see how Molly reacts to everything. Will Harry receive one of her famous Howlers for not allowing Ron to walk all over him? I’m pretty sure he will be scolded over Ginny. I guess I have to wait and see.

It’s interesting that Harry accepts Fleur’s apology. I’m sure he’ll hear about that from the Weasleys, at some point.

If Ron Weasley is the Headbastard's idea of Light, he's evil as Hell, both of them are. Not light, not dark, not human. Evil.

Love it! Great story! Got a little dark there during Harry's depressed stage. Great ending

One of the best stories and most original stories I have read on this site. Well done!

Awwwe, I wanted Bill to be a good guy. Shame that isn't what YOU wanted for this story.

This is an interesting take. I am interested to see where it goes.

Could have at least got rid of stupid horcrux plot point

I love fanfiction like this I hate when they’re incompleted I know circumstances may prevent the completion of fanfiction but I have to say I love a good story. I have a good few stories that I like and love this one until the love category. There is not much fun fictions like this out there with Harry and Gabby pairing so congrats, it might be a lot to you but you have my ultimate thanks Lord pevril

I adore !
Great story and you created a great family.