|Reviews for Divine Evil|
| Shadow40000 chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
yeah... don't delete this account b4 informing! :o!
i want my review to be on your chapter when u post it on the new account...
such good fics deserve many reviews! :D
| Shadow40000 chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
u like included parts of each groups :D
u've put a lotta efforts in this fic.. awesome!
time traveler? interesting... so this Tarquinn guy... he's gonna play a key role in this fic i presume then?
"Yes, die" Understand this, (just saw this part... a lil bit mistake with the apostrophes... nothin big, just thought i'd point it out.
Ah.. Axel... the electricity manipulator...! was waitin to read bout 'im x] u obv know why :P
so he just got his powers? O.o intriguing... can't wait to know what happens next :D
Liar Liar! pants on fire! Liar lair! keep your soul from catching fire! Fire! LMAAAOOOO xDD whats with those cheesy lines, aye? xD
ACE?! wha..whaaa...t?! NOOOOOOO D'x so i'l hav to change mine? :'(
So she names them after the policen codes? :P
interesting... so she's alpha then right? :P
but then the alphas... it aint related is it? xP
and ahaa... i like(totally) this Beau character already...! xP
woah... those duds were killed?! woah... wonder who did all that :/
raiden and violet.. hmm...
the Alphas... sound like an interesting group...
lets see how they work in this fic..
The first Non-One Piece Fic to go in my favourites list!
Great great work at this chappy Rosa-chin..!
| Shadow40000 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
ok honest review...
the begining was a bit toooo detailed.. (just my opinion)
i got a bit lost there... ._. (no offense)
but as it went on, i got on with the flow. her powers were well described...pandora i mean. lol i could feel the chills while reading bout her...
she seems like a very well created antagonist.. devouring souls ._.
a evolved Mystique maybe... KOOL! but freaky _
great chapter.. great prologue...
great job Rosa-chin..!
| darkmaster429 chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter
| TheWritingGirl23 chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I'm glad this story is continuing. After seeing it go through several rewrites I am hoping to see it progress and grow into full fruition. I would be honored to cowrite with you; I've kind of gotten attached to this story more than usual, and I would love to help if you'll have me. I'm pretty good with grammar and character interactions, at least I believe so, so I can help where I can in those areas. Good luck with college and your writing!
| Rook2Pwn chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Glad to see you're still around. I've already fav your new user name so I can't wait to see you continue this story. Though take your time of course. Real life take precedence over fanfiction. Though I'd be willing to help you out with writing if you need it. I've been attempting to co-write a fanfic with my friend with the user name Rooktorose, though it's been on a hiatus because said friend had/has issues to deal with. But you seem willing and able to keep up updates, so if you want to co-write with me send me a message.
| darkmaster429 chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
Excellent start I can't wait til it gets updated please please hurry I can only amuse myself with other stories for so long
| KA chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Great chapter. Hope to read more.
| San child of the wolves chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
Lovely chapter. I love how you did Blade. And the other pics were great as well. Well good luck on the next chapter. Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I thought I had resoponded before but I looked back and saw that i didn't. Well anyways again good luck on the next chapter.
| Munamana chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
man this is a graet start to the story, i like how you touch base with most if not all of the main groups and you do a great job with introducing the characters. good luck with the rest of the story as i look forward to reading more.
| Huntress chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Wow, this was similar, but really different from before, and very well written. I loved how you wrote and introduced Violet, I guess her ability would have protected her from the slaughter that killed everyone else...
| Death For One chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
Wow. This was amazingly well written. I loved every syllable of it.
| FresianFire chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
Wow that was great! I can actually picture it like a movie and I really liked reading all the different groups an how those characters interact with each other. It looks like it's going to be a good story so keep up the good work!
| TheWritingGirl23 chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
Wow, wasn't expecting this out so soon, but I'm glad it is.
This seems a lot more coherent now, showing major plot points and introducing the different groups in order. I get the Tarquinn and Axel bits a little better than I did before. I also like the different group dynamics you've set up (except the Sewer Rats, from what I've read they haven't appeared yet). Medusa seems a little scary in how they interact, Alphas are harsh but they watch each other, and the Bandits seem the most normal of them all. I also like the portrayals of Anne and Pandora, Anne seems tough but logical, and Pandora is nice and menacing :) Keep it up, cause I'm rooting for this story.
| San child of the wolves chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Lovely prologue. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it.