|Reviews for Max Payne: Maximum Payne|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
" I was supper man high on krypto aboot to jump throw a sky"
You got that from max payne one where max payne say's " I wasn't fooling anyone at best I was superman on kryptonite about to fall through the skylight down to where it was all going down"
This fic is very bad.
| Mordekai Romanus chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
| PopPunk13 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Thank you for your kind words sir/madam. I will take these on board and make my next work a true masterpiece.
| Taketo Sanada chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Well...gosh, what a mess.
This fic is suck,and retarded!
Did you wrote this fic with drunk or did crack?
It's NOT Max Payne fanfic, it's crack-fic or troll-fic!
It reminds me whole troll-fic written by hammohamster,or Gabe Fard's "Duke Nukems Glorious Adventure"(It sucks,TOO)...
Jesus, I hope fanfic critic find this and review it...