Reviews for Snack Patrol
Junior VB chapter 5 . 5/18
No está mal.
Not bad.
Junior VB chapter 3 . 5/18
Pobre Gaz, jaja.
Poor Gaz, haha.
otherrealmwriter chapter 5 . 9/14/2012
This was a nice short story. I liked it and found it amusing.
otherrealmwriter chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
Another pretty good chapter but I noticed you put the SIR wrong. SIR in IZ is all caps and spelled like the word.


"They're called Ser bots" continued Tak. It should be

"They're called SIR bots" continued Tak.
otherrealmwriter chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Nice chapter but you put in the wrong new in this sentence:

"Good news everyone" said Professor Farnsworth, "three knew employees from Fry's own century will be joining us as employees."

the knew should be the new.
Lyra405 chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
Not bad, only a few grammar errors here and there. I'd like to point out that the youngest son is called Igner, not Ignes, but people misspelling his name is a pretty common mistake. So yeah, pretty good )
Guest chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This is awesome... Awesome to the max