Reviews for Snack Patrol
otherrealmwriter chapter 5 . 9/14/2012
This was a nice short story. I liked it and found it amusing.
otherrealmwriter chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
Another pretty good chapter but I noticed you put the SIR wrong. SIR in IZ is all caps and spelled like the word.

Here:

"They're called Ser bots" continued Tak. It should be

"They're called SIR bots" continued Tak.
otherrealmwriter chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Nice chapter but you put in the wrong new in this sentence:

"Good news everyone" said Professor Farnsworth, "three knew employees from Fry's own century will be joining us as employees."

the knew should be the new.
Lyra405 chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
Not bad, only a few grammar errors here and there. I'd like to point out that the youngest son is called Igner, not Ignes, but people misspelling his name is a pretty common mistake. So yeah, pretty good )
Guest chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
Bad ending. ZIM SHOULD HAVE CONQUERED EARTH!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This is awesome... Awesome to the max