Reviews for Deceptive Reality
Specky Clarke chapter 10 . 9/21/2016
A very interesting AU story that is totally out there. I read another story where Snape was Harry's father by Lily due to a one night drunken stand. That was good too.
wandamarie chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
thank you for your time and telnet
BeholdTheMetatron1946 chapter 8 . 9/5/2016
this is pretty interesting,
fix up your spelling errors and figure out where you want the story to go (I'd suggest an explicitly detailed plan for that, trust me it helps... writer's block SUCKS, I'm struggling with it right now myself! I find watching wrestling helps as well)
Have you ever heard of National Novel Writing Month? (that's where you write 50,000 words in 30 days - November)
You are a gifted writer, this is a very good story, I suggest you maybe consider writing the rest of it for NaNoWriMo (that's the abbreviated name)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/28/2016
Continue please ... :)
BeholdTheMetatron1946 chapter 9 . 2/18/2016
this has potential but there are typographic or spelling errors all the way through
bexlovessev chapter 9 . 2/13/2015
Please update.
AuqaLilly2.0 chapter 9 . 6/10/2014
Lol loved the ending can't wait for the next chapter-Megz.
Sheiky81 chapter 9 . 5/18/2014
LOVE IT! I hope u update soon. The story is awesome. Kudos!
Meel Jacques chapter 7 . 1/29/2014
SO PRETTY!
Meel Jacques chapter 6 . 1/29/2014
OMG! That a mess!
Meel Jacques chapter 5 . 1/29/2014
Poor Harry. 3
If I were a boy my name would be Alexander. 3
Meel Jacques chapter 4 . 1/29/2014
OMG! NOOOOO! Albus bad, very bad!
Meel Jacques chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
Xander not is beautiful. :p
Meel Jacques chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
I was totally confused. I understood nothing. uhauhauahau
Meel Jacques chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
OMG! I loved it!
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