|Reviews for Follow the Sun|
| Beanie chapter 2 . 8/18/2017
Very-nice. You seem to create the exact haze I get when I'm tired and sick.
| Macca chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
Very good for your first fanfic. Nice one-liners in there especially, " John gave his head a sudden and violent shake to clear it free of the cobwebs that seemed to be super-glued to it by crafty spiders". It flows smoothly. The irish slang is vexing; especially the "ye's" and the "g'days" and the "me's" and "yers". The beatles came from liverpool so they didn't speak with that slang.
very good overall.
| singertobe chapter 36 . 7/29/2016
Another great chapter! I like seeing it from the doctor and nurse's POVs.
| asms2 chapter 35 . 7/22/2016
I just read your story this week, and I enjoyed it!
| Nika Nou chapter 33 . 7/5/2016
Well done my friend. Suspense-filled and heart-breaking as always. Keep writing!
| John Steppenwolf chapter 35 . 7/1/2016
I've enjoyed this fic a lot from what you have written so far.
2 things: 1) No Neil Aspinall? I seem to recall that both he and Mal were the group's roadies and friends from the days of Pete Best and even after the Beatles split in the 1970s. 2) From what I've found in researching the Beatles over the years, according to sources, George had no middle name on his birth certificate.
Keep up the good work.
| singertobe chapter 35 . 6/29/2016
Great chapter! Good to see Ringo's headache is gone. Hopefully that's a good sign :)
| singertobe chapter 34 . 6/22/2016
Another amazing chapter! I love your depiction of limbo!
| Snakequeen-in-Norway chapter 16 . 6/21/2016
Wow, this is intense! Poor John! Also, seriously? Those fans! Screaming during the songs, putting their hands all over them, themthe reporters (except the 1) caring more about gossip than John's health. Have some human decency! -SQ
| Snakequeen-in-Norway chapter 9 . 6/20/2016
Side characters are bloody hard, aren't they? That was partly in reference to the doctor, but mostly your earlier comment about writing John's aunt.
Never in a million years would I have thought I would be reading fanfiction about real people. It took me long enough to stop being weirded out by writing romance/sex for tv characters, whose faces and bodies belong to real people. Fanfictioning real people's lives was somewhere I thought I would definitely never go. But I stumbled across this when looking at the favorites of a user who reviewed one of my fics and was surprisingly intrigued. I'm an absolute sucker for sicfics and I love bromance. I'm telling myself that because the Beatles had movie character personas of themselves that I've seen in A Hard Day's NightI know exist in other films, that this is still sorta writing about charactersnot real people's lives, or at least fictionalizing lives that have already been fictionalized. Anyway, I'm enjoying it a lot and I'm impressed by your Beatle knowledge. The language about gay people is a little uncomfortable, but I get that it's totally periodthey really aren't homophobic, just living in a homophobic society. -SQ
| singertobe chapter 33 . 6/16/2016
Oh boy! It sounds like Ringo has got it too. Whatever it is. Poor Paulie! I wanna give him a hug!
| AmudPuddle chapter 32 . 6/12/2016
I really love the story and characters as you write them and I do hope that you choose to continue it!
| Judith chapter 32 . 2/19/2016
| Jude chapter 32 . 1/24/2016
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
This story is wonderful and intenense
PLEASE DON'T KILL THEM
| Eloise Crabapple chapter 32 . 1/6/2016
I love this story! Please please please don't kill them:,( and please don't stop writing it:)