|Reviews for Beautiful Monster|
| DuckofIndeed chapter 3 . 2/20
This is a really interesting idea, and this story is really well-written. I look forward to what happens next.
| LaCorpse chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
I really love this story. Ive never read a fanfic that gave me chills and teary eyes. I could relate with this story in a way. The relationship with the father really makes me tear up and that creepy heart wrenching feelings of walking through her dark house with little lighting. Really good detail. Thanks so much and I really hope to hear more from this story.
| Rafael Diabhal chapter 4 . 9/22/2013
You're not really going to quit, are you? Because I'd seriously like to see this story continue. I have yet to see an idea like this during my time lurking FF and I find your writing quite good.
| REDRydingHood chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
oh my gosh you should totally continue this story! it sounds amazing so far!
| Dark Lord Ganondorf chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Yay Serena! Cool OC, MWR!
| xXFallen-Angel-Of-DarknessXx chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
This story seems really interesting and dark, i love it! I hope you update soon :3
| SoulMaiden24 chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
I love this story! It is extremely amazing and I would love to read more of it!
| Hollow Earth chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
I only read three items. I'm probably stupid though. But I think it would be food.
| Hollow Earth chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I think I just read my Zelda FanFic Heaven. Yah. This is the best book EVER! I love of books im writing some myself. YOUR AN AMAZING AUTHOR! I wish I was as good as you at writing. Update please! Your amazing. I just ignored the typos because i probably have twis as many. BUT AMAZING WORK!
| Gentle Melodious Nocturne chapter 3 . 12/4/2012
This is so awesome! Please update I really want to know which she chooses!
| Triforce of Awesome chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
Omg. This story is so awesome! c:
Strangely though, this is oddly reminiscent of Beauty and the Beast ._. A twisted, gorey, Zelda-fied version anyway. Girl is sort of an outcast, mean guy likes girl, girl takes the heat for something her dad did. Well, the dad didn't really do anything, but the overall key points apply .-. I like Beauty and the Beast though. - I don't know if it's intentional or anything, but I like it nonetheless! c:
I'm kind of a Ghirahim fanatic, so...yeah. I'll just leave now. ( ._.)
| eureka93 chapter 3 . 11/30/2012
Wow, this is good. o.o
Gah, now I'm debating which item I would choose...and probably over-thinking it...
Well, I think the sword is out, if she has a dagger and a bow.
No to the cloak. If it was cold, she probably wouldn't have left the house without something.
But I just realized, he's tested her courage to find him, now he's testing her wisdom... (I'm just considering) power would be next. So if Serena had to fight something, potions would come in handy...
That leaves food...it would be a yes, considering it's one of the basics of survival, and if they can hardly come back with game...
...I'll go with food. This is still going to bother me. T.T
| Gentle Melodious Nocturne chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Wow! What an amazing first chapter! It's like reading a good fantasy novel and I'm not exaggerating! There were couple of parts that were confusing like here:
"Ingo, you're over exaggerating," came the soft reply of mild mannered Talon. "Surely things can't be that bad." His fifteen year old daughter Malon chimed in.
"But it is Daddy. The vegetables aren't growing well; some are spoiling in the ground!" This news was received with even a stronger reaction than the news of the future grain harvest.
I wasn't sure who she was talking to. I assume you meant "But it is Malon."
And you used "started" quite a bit in this sentence, "An uneasy feeling /started to turn her stomach into knots and an icy feeling /started to dance up her spine"
Perhaps "began" or "commenced"?
But those are really little things this story was GREAT! Will definitely keep reading!
| Valkyrie chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
The story is amazing-emotionally engaging and pleasantly dark. I'm wondering who G is-is it Ghirahim?
I've yet to play Skyward, so please pardon my ignorance.
However, the story is awesome, and I'd love to read more.
Keep it up!
| Princess Zelda-figure skater chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Oh wow! Oooooh, this story is really interesting! :D I can't wait for the next chapter! :D