Reviews for I Spy part 2
Isabel164 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Wow what an angst!

I really loved this one although you can just add a second chapter to 'I Spy'. You don't have to make a whole new story to post the second chapter. I have an alert on the other one so I found this by accident so maybe it's easier for the readers if you just add a second chapter, not making 5 stories, with each the second chapter of the story you know.

The is really really great! The only bit of criticism is the time. I mean, he came into their house, pulled a gun to Meredith's head, Derek shot him in the arm, police couldn't do anything for them and they just went to sleep like nothing happenend. The time is moving a bit fast you know but the angst is definitelly there and I love it.
The last sentences... Oh boy, is that Wayne again? Kidnapping Zola or Meredith? Or maybe Derek now that he's u conscious.

I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon please! :)

Warm regards,