Wow Hermione so Harry has to marry the one who killed his parents because you thought it was a good idea. What a b #ch.
I do overall like the story and how it is written and look forward to reading the rest.

I enjoyed reading this again. I always enjoy the stories that include Harry helping Loki to get his kids back. I’ve even read one where Harry was one of Loki’s kids who made it his mission to find and free all his siblings.

well... I'm sorry, but this has gotten too much. At this point, I like your style of writing, but what you write is a bit too much for me. I'm sorry but I can't continue reading this story. I don't mean to insult you, or to make you feel bad about this story. Just saying this story is written for a VERY small percentage of potential readers, a very narrow potential audience and I am not one of them. I appreciate your work as you undoubtedly took time and effort to write it, but it's just a difference of opinion.

Ummm... okay. Again, the same thing I said about the previous chapters, a bit too much, well, more than a bit. But the plot is coming along, so ill keep reading. But if you go back and edit, please, turn down hr torture and violence. Most readers (yes, including myself) would prefer to know, "Loki had been tortured by guards forced to obey Thanos" instead of two chapters of graphic torture. But the segment with Frigga I liked. 8thumbs up*

ok... a bit too graphic again, and the rape was entirely unnecessary. But the other bits, with thanos, that was more interesting. The description, although I can't exactly agree with writing what you wrote, and would not do it myself, you got it, and I congratulate you. I will disagree in what you wrote in this chapter, but the how, how you wrote it was good.

Ok... the intro is so OOC I can't really, but since the plot doesn't really center on that... I'm gonna keep reading. I don't mind Dark harry or even HP/TMR stories, but that type? and mpreg? I have nothing against gay people, but I'm an amateur scientist, and it's kinda a pet peeve of mine to do things that are so impossible they shouldn't be made possible. Such as biological no lab required reproduction in a species in a way it's not supposed to work. I'm sorry if that sounds a bit weird, but I will continue reading because worst-case scenario I'll skip over those scenes. The reason why I'm waiting so much is that I know, as also an ffn author how much detailed reviews of people's true opinions past "lol" or "nice" really mean to me, so I'm going by doing unto others as you wish for others to do unto you.
But the ending to this chapter does sound interesting, and the way you put it, the wording is on point. So that hints at an improving storyline, can't wait, time to click for the next chapter.

Great story

Great story

Perfect ending

I absolutely adore the fact that Luna is Death.

Very entertaining story. It was different and I had a difficult time picturing/placing some of the characters since I’m more familiar with HP than the Marvel characters, but overall it was a good story.

this was good!

I enjoyed how you wove all the characters together with cameos of other famous superheroes. It fit with the Potterverse. I would have liked to know if Voldemort and Luna enjoyed their relationship.

OMG I like this story! I just don't review it often because it isn't a work in progress. I'll just have to favorite it so all the Canadians who watch my rec's can also read it's yummy goodness. Cheers.

Honestly I wasn’t sure how much I’d like this story at first but i loves it! It sucked me in and I didn’t wanna stop reading! Way to go!