Reviews for Gate Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. This story is bloody amazing. Has anyone adopted it yet. If so tell me there name |
![]() ![]() Hiya, just thought I'd remind you O'Neill has two ll's in it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this. Do you know if anyone has adopted it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please let me know if this story gets adopted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello Goddess Vampire, I would like to adopt this fanfiction. A few things I change, however. If you do not like it, I'll delete my composure. Yours sincerely |
![]() ![]() Hi, I'd like to adopt this fanfiction. My e-mail address is |
![]() ![]() Wish you could continue the story as it's really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seemed like a good start and would have been very interesting the first time he did something with magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i will adopt it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very sad that your not able continue this stories but I must point out that the first three chapters were excellent for me to want to read more just to learn how Harry would have grown with his new "daddy". But also to learn how Jack's ex-wife would have felt about him adopting little Harry. As for Harry he seems to behave much younger than his age (sign) but I suppose this due what he's been through since he parent's died. Either way I do hope someone does decide to adopt this story but I do praise your courage to write the first chapters and then placing it on fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() but I like this story! I hope some one adopts it though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good. Continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it and I can't wait for harry to do some acidental magic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens with as Harry gets older and what he all does, and how Jack helps him learn magic, keep up the great work, can't wait to read more. SeaBreeze :-) |