Reviews for Gate Child
inuyasha16451 chapter 4 . 1/31/2021
Omg. This story is bloody amazing. Has anyone adopted it yet. If so tell me there name
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2016
Hiya, just thought I'd remind you

O'Neill has two ll's in it...
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 4 . 1/7/2016
I have enjoyed this. Do you know if anyone has adopted it?
phantombrick chapter 4 . 10/1/2015
Please let me know if this story gets adopted.
Kaiser Harry James Potter chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Hello Goddess Vampire,

I would like to adopt this fanfiction. A few things I change, however.

If you do not like it, I'll delete my composure.

Yours sincerely
Lord Black reade chapter 4 . 7/10/2015
Hi, I'd like to adopt this fanfiction. My e-mail address is
Jennifer Stewart chapter 4 . 3/1/2014
Wish you could continue the story as it's really good!
WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
It seemed like a good start and would have been very interesting the first time he did something with magic.
MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
i will adopt it
Griffin Raven chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
I'm very sad that your not able continue this stories but I must point out that the first three chapters were excellent for me to want to read more just to learn how Harry would have grown with his new "daddy". But also to learn how Jack's ex-wife would have felt about him adopting little Harry. As for Harry he seems to behave much younger than his age (sign) but I suppose this due what he's been through since he parent's died. Either way I do hope someone does decide to adopt this story but I do praise your courage to write the first chapters and then placing it on fanfiction.
kariza2013 chapter 4 . 5/30/2013
but I like this story! I hope some one adopts it though!
lordessoftime-tau chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
This is good. Continue!
littleweb chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
more please
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
Love it and I can't wait for harry to do some acidental magic
SeaBreeze2Ga chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens with as Harry gets older and what he all does, and how Jack helps him learn magic, keep up the great work, can't wait to read more.

SeaBreeze :-)
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