|Reviews for The Lily and The desert rose|
| Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 4/7
NO, FUCK YOU
| Dakukaosu no Liam chapter 6 . 10/21/2013
You do realize shukaku is the ONE tail do you?
But other then that, great so far.
| RedBunny28 chapter 38 . 9/8/2013
OMG! I wonder what's that all about, haaaa! I can't wait to find out :")
I hope she's preggy x) Lol
Well, whatever gonna wait for the next chapter to find out right? ;)
*sigh* I hope it will be soon :( I was like checking everyday just to find out if you , but I'm afraid I just disappoint myself... Too bad -.-
Well maybe its worth the wait, but next chapter should be a really GREAT ONE! Don't you dare disappoint me! X) Lol!
please keep up the good work ;) more power!
| sillystorm28 chapter 38 . 2/24/2013
she's pregnant. obvious much hahaahhaa xD anyways, it was good, a few mistakes in spelling and a few broken sentenses, but you had a good storyline to it and you also managed to capture and then adapt the characters quite well. i think the one thing that i didnt like was how you kinda ruined hinata's and gaara's first time together, because the entire time i wasnt sure if it was matsuri or actually hinata which ruined the romantic feel and made it more suspicious. but i really liked the bit when gaara claimed hinata with 'LOVE', it was really sweet and cute so, good job :D
| snowkatl chapter 38 . 2/13/2013
XD his eyes grew wide and she whispered to him! OMG it's i think I know what's she going to say she's *********! I can't say It I might spoil it if I'm right! Right? Well I hope to see another chapter! I fell in love with this story! If there were a rating bar thing and it would out of ten I would choose ten! TEN! x3
| snowkatl chapter 37 . 2/13/2013
Wait so what was Itachi planning on doing with Hinata anyway?
| snowkatl chapter 36 . 2/13/2013
Whaaaat I thought Hinata would be alot more stronger...
| snowkatl chapter 35 . 2/13/2013
:o OHHH so that was her plan...Pffft I already knew that was going to happen! :3
| snowkatl chapter 34 . 2/13/2013
Wooosh that's a relief! At least they made up! Cause at first I was like OMG THERE TAKING HINATA BACK! BUUUT it ended a happy ending well for the chapter! But wait...*GASP* what about Matsuri?!
| snowkatl chapter 33 . 2/13/2013
Lolololol Neji is saying Hinata broke there so called 'bond'! Pfffft what bond! All he's been doing is torturing Hinata! .
| snowkatl chapter 32 . 2/13/2013
OMG Matsuri how could you say think that of Hinata! *sniffle* she's been through much! ),:
| ShinoCoolGaaraAwesome chapter 38 . 2/6/2013
This felt like I was reading a very long poem :) It was well written, though too poetic to be believable. Loved it though! Btw, this is not ment to be a criticism, just an opinion. If you take it as a flame, then please ignore this comment completely. I love poetry and that is what your writing style seems like. This fic was a long romantic poem :D
| theInsaneArtist chapter 23 . 1/24/2013
You like your purple prose, don't you? That's okay, at least it's still well written, and the plot is good.
| snowkatl chapter 31 . 1/21/2013
Yeah ummm this was good
| snowkatl chapter 29 . 1/21/2013
oh no what will happen to there love?! Matsuri why'd you have to like Gaara why not kankuro he's free take him!