Reviews for Underrate Risks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The story of Sleipnir is simultaneously so gross and so cool |
![]() ![]() This is stupid. |
![]() ![]() How does Rhodey, a decorated officer in the Navy, NOT know who Bruce fucking Banner is? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope he kills them all for this betrayal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! Loved it, you did him justice! May inspiration hits again, taking you all the way to a sequel. May Loki inspire you again darling. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story and a very different take on loki and tony that i haven’t read before. The other avengers where well written but natasha was a bit ooc for the time, she was like she was still in the red room |
![]() ![]() ![]() hoho the plot thickens |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed your story. Well done on the character development. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, first off, Bruce was being hunted by the military for a long time, and I am pretty sure that the branches of the military talk to each other, meaning that Rhodes would know who Bruce was. Second, YAY WOLVERINE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can actually still use the cut and paste function, if you are still doing this. There are two different ways to do this. The first way is exporting the story using fichub. net, which will allow you to export the story as a number of different types of files that will allow you to cut and paste the text from your story into whatever you choose to use for editing. The second way is to use the mobile version of the site by putting m. instead of www. in the address bar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Bruce is the only avenger who wouldn't be fine with killing. Clint and Natasha are both assassins, Cap and Thor have fought in multiple wars, and Tony has killed his kidnappers and fought against terrorists. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooohhh! This is good :) :) :) Tony versus the Avengers. Nicely done. I do have one question: this is before IM3, so Tony still has the Arc Reactor inside his chest. Correct? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, you do have good fics ides :) And on with this story, clicking the Next button right away. |
![]() ![]() I wonder what would happen if you take fragments of Bruce Wayne's mind AKA Batman The willpower determination to learn everything knowledge and skill of over 250 martial arts a secret underground city he calls The Shadow Gallery all the time from Batman's world and the ability to switch between persona masks iron Man is like the chivalrous night Batman's already used to pretend to be Bruce Wayne so just get a little bit more drunk slightly more playful Bruce Wayne and you get Tony Stark and then Batman is the assassin slash infiltrator information broker vigilante in this instance Bruce Wayne still makes Jarvis except he doesn't just make one he makes 10 no wait correction 13 because it's much more easier if each AI had the capacity to run everything but had specialties that way Jarvis wouldn't be alone and he would have sisters and brothers so Tony develops everything that he would originally develop except now he can amplify everything from having sciences from the Justice League world and Batman's suits. He also has the ultimate detective ability Batman has and as soon as Tony can get his hands on the proper materials you know he's going to make detective mode maybe studies Spider-Man and develop some sort of spider Sense for the suit something something satellites something something cameras in the suit something something cameras all over the world something something using every phone in the world to map out something something all input it into a giant server Tony built to run simulations so we can use that as a battle precognition software or something I would like to see how this Tony turns out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK first of all, that is an unfair assessment of Tony Starks personality. It was something Natasha put together when he was DYING of poisoning. Secondly, Tony is one of their teammates right now and not an enemy, so what right do his teammates have to his fake psychological profile? That is such a gross invasion of privacy. Also the fact that not a single one of them is disputing the profile is so disheartening. Because Tony has done plenty to prove that he is everything but the things that are mentioned in their profile. I really hope as the story goes on you don’t continue this portrayal of Tony. |