|Reviews for Broken|
| ruby chapter 4 . 9/29/2020
omg this is amazing but I was wondering… do you think you could make a sequel? where sonic isn't actually dead
| Ifspringywasgood chapter 4 . 7/3/2020
That was depressing, thanks for that
But man... that endingggggggg
Free to run and never stop?! My freaking HEART
| Writingiscoolbeans220 chapter 4 . 5/4/2020
holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. Wait a minute, you predicted what everybody thought happened to sonic in forces when he was kidnapped and uh 'Tortured'. i'm gonna call this a forces alternative :D
| NovaDeer chapter 4 . 9/10/2019
Well I didn't know what I expected but dang
| SuperKirbyLand234 chapter 4 . 12/9/2018
Yeah I didn’t like this story and it’s not just because I already don’t like fanfics that are basically torture porn for the characters I like but also because of one glaring plot hole in the story: Sonic’s friends just gave up without a fight?! I can kinda understand Tails and Amy but Knuckles, Rouge, Shadow? I’m sorry but you wrote these characters a little too OOC for my taste because knowing these characters that is extremely unrealistic, even if this is just fanfiction. If I was writing this, it would’ve gone the Sonic Forces route and I’d have everyone and their mother fight against Eggman for the freedom of the planet. And I might have bought their quick surrender if it wasn’t for the fact that Eggman said they’d end up like Sonic, beaten and broken, if they didn’t surrender; considering he has thousands of robots and the planet is homed to millions of Mobians, this whole conflict should’ve ended in three seconds.
| OcheanMyth chapter 4 . 10/31/2018
... I dont know what to say about the ending. But this was a good written story.
| EastofJuly chapter 1 . 2/13/2018
Is it possible that Metal found a way to get him free in secret it's not really an fear battle at the end either
| My name is 2 lon chapter 4 . 1/12/2018
| problematic spiral chapter 3 . 8/7/2017
Ouch, extreme torture. I like to see my favorite characters get tortured, so when I read this, didn't expect it to be really graphic (but also useful for imagining those who annoy us as Sonic), but it's dark and unique in its own way. Your writing is also very good, I grimaced at some of the torture parts. Heart-wrenching but awesome.
| TRIGGERED chapter 4 . 5/15/2017
I'm triggered because of this I always get annoyed when someone makes a great story yet it only lasts a few chapters please make more.
| Amaterasu chapter 4 . 12/4/2016
Wow! This was just amazing! I was just wondering, this is like my fith time reading this, and I was thinking if you could maybe make an alternative ending where Sonic was able to find strength. Anyway, great story!
| Paloma chapter 4 . 3/25/2016
Wha... Wait what? NOOOOOOOOOOO! GOD DAMN IT WHY!?
| Paloma chapter 3 . 3/25/2016
Holy. Shit. Holy shit. Shit is getting real son. Sadly, it's ending too! ;-;
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2016
;-; omg. Just, omg. If I was writing a franchise like this, I would be scared of getting flame. I am so proud of you for standing up and writing this. My hands are shaking from excitement and it's midnight here. I love this franchise. I could read this for my whole life!
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/27/2015
It was really sad but pretty good. You should make a different ending though like instead of dieting sonic has new found strength if you don't mind I'd like to make it. Just send an email to me at . for approval