Reviews for Dearest Father
Lucien Grey chapter 75 . 2/14
Yes. Soon.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 76 . 2/10
Great work on all 76 chapters.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 50 . 2/10
Such amazing work on chapters 42 to 50.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 40 . 2/10
Amazing work from chapters 33 thru 40.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 32 . 2/9
I've enjoyed reading chapters 27 through 32.
Lady Velvet C. Peterson chapter 76 . 2/9
ahhh Merrill, you silly stupid girl
Gaspode chapter 76 . 2/9
Another tragedy that was just waiting to happen. Merrill is such an innocent. In a way she's the best demon fodder. She just wants the best for all and becomes an outsider because of it. All for a lie. I doubt this is the kind of guilt she will be able to shed.
Gaspode chapter 75 . 2/9
Sebastian is a wuz! Grumble grumble...

That aside, a nice little ghost story there. I feel sorry for Varric. He's always so at ease with himself it's easy to forget the tragedies he's suffered.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 26 . 2/8
Well done with chapters 22 through 26.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 21 . 2/8
I loved reading chapters 15 through 21.
EkoCentric chapter 76 . 2/8
This is a very interesting perspective on this quest. (I have to admit that I've never paid attention to the elven ghosts who they were, just killed them! lol)
Fighting with only two mages and two archers is a nightmare indeed!
Genesis Vakarian chapter 14 . 2/7
Well done with chapters 1 thrpugh 14 my friend.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 8 . 2/7
well done with both chapters 7 amd 8 as well.
Genesis Vakarian chapter 6 . 2/7
I've enjoyed reading the first six chapters. Well done.
Eve Hawke chapter 76 . 2/6
I really dislike Merrill. I find her vapid, selfish, naive, even dumb... but her story is tragic. Just as so many in the DA world are. I like your telling of it. Well done.

Now, I hope she does better in the future. Because really, someone needs to hand her to the templars. ;-) Wait, don't you have a fic like that? XD
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