|Reviews for His World|
| Shikamaru's babygirl chapter 12 . 7/4/2013
A very nice story indeed. Wish a little more romance would've been displayed, but this worked just fine for me :)
Question though, you made the ending seem like this wasn't going to be the end of it all. Will there be a sequel? You kinda left us hanging with the Sega and the Zoro/Robin thing .
Good story either way!
| Fan chapter 12 . 6/19/2013
Great Fanfic :3 I wish there were more Chapters :D
| shinigami hime chapter 12 . 5/22/2013
Yet again my fellow one piece lover...
I praise you for creating such story!
Even I had a tough time writing about battles/fights..
Bravo! Magnificent! Nice! Awesome!
You have my gratitude...
| shinigami hime chapter 7 . 5/22/2013
somehow... this story kinda reminds me of One Piece The movie 10: STRONG WORLD...
3 love it btw..
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/13/2012
You are amazing :)
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/8/2012
you really hate Nami do you? Sega, evil not much but his is cruel really a sadistic.. why do you like torturing Nami oh ... poor Nami. I has good plot with good characters the villains premise and all just too haste in execution and too much of Nami pain and torture/description makes it looks gory and bit sickening.
| SweetHero chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
No! How could it be over?! Aww man. That was a great story!
| Reignashii chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
aww that's it? it kinna felt like there were things still that needed to be told, though it has opened it up for a set up for a sequel
| Dalamin Sahara chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
Have you finished? I was loving it.
Well .. was a great fic.
Continues writing! ;)
| clea everlasting chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
Nooooooooooooooooooo other chapter pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I want to read more LuNa T.T
| Santoryuu3 chapter 12 . 12/6/2012
No kiss? Really?
But still great ending, and a cliffhanger for a possible sequel...? Anyway, congrats on your lisence and be awesome. ;)
Btw... Was that a ZoRobin moment near the beginning? Eh? Eh! *wink wink*
| NinjaSheik chapter 12 . 12/6/2012
Congrats on finishing! Not a bad ending, but I wanted more ZoRobin fluff! :P All in all, awesome story! :)
| smoll Gcat chapter 11 . 12/3/2012
me:"what the hell franky XD?"
| StarKiss666 chapter 11 . 12/2/2012
They're already together? Lol ;)
| clea everlasting chapter 11 . 12/2/2012
I am happy! You continue it _
Poor Luffy T.T
I want to read other chapter