Reviews for Coming Out of the Dark
Vampy chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
Aaarrg... cliffhanger! The big reuniting! So exciting... Hope you'll update soon! ;) V.
deideidei chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Amazing! Lovely! This is actually getting better and better by the chapter.
deideidei chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I like Chapter 2 Excursion. I like the characters reactions and the details that you put in your stories. When I grow up I want to write like you. Don't worry I'm going to write a story soon.
deideidei chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
The first review I wrote was abotu the prologue, my apologizes un. First, I'd liek to say that I really do like the amount of detail you put into the story. The descriptions of the characters were most amazing. I really do admire your work.

Question: Wasn't Alex found without any gear? Because in the story you wrote how did you ended up on the mountain with any gear?

If so could you possibly explain that to me?
deideidei chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Very beautiful un! I admire the first chapter. It made me ask a lot of questions about Alex. Is he really a vampire and why won't they tell Priscilla the truth about what a vampire is. And another thing why is her mother denying the fact that her son might just be what she doesn't want him to be? You should keep your writing techniques up Un.
Zuzanny chapter 5 . 1/8/2008
I am really enjoying this fic so far! Please write more soon!
miarath chapter 5 . 10/6/2007
I like your work. I really do.

and I would really see a another chapter...

though I know how it is not to post in almost two years.

Did it my self.

so live another day...
lightindarkness chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
I like your discriptive. considering you havn't updated in awhile I asume you have writers block, to give you an idea. were's Scarlet?
wickedly sweet chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
i liked your story very, very much. you used great detail and i only have one question: How old is Pris?
Lady Grail chapter 4 . 2/22/2005
I love this story i hope you write more and i plan to add my own chapter to the story. Mine takes another turn but yours is also awsome keep writing in between dogies and kitties.

_Lady Grail - fellow writer
The BatThing chapter 4 . 6/25/2004
It’s about time! Awesome possum! I loved it as I always do! I especially enjoyed the part how you said Alex looked 15, but he had really been a Vampire for 5 years of more! Wow! I can wait for the next chapter! Just as long as you promise to write it before I die please! Tee-hee! Thanks for posting this chapter, I await you next!

Max Evelyn chapter 3 . 10/5/2003
hi I've got the Crimson comic series and wow, I love Vampires
Jacqueline Land chapter 3 . 10/2/2003
Oh, yay Crimson! D

I love the idea for this, and your OCs are spectacular. Hopefully Joe will get some real time in later chapters, 'cause he's awesome.

The only nitpickery I have is the characterization of Pris. You're doing an incredibly difficult thing here, and you're doing it better than I ever could. But she's still only seven. Some of her thought-patterns and replies seem a little too mature for the way you've set up everything else. (IE "If he doesn't understand what he's looking for, he'll never find anything.") Her anger at god is very realiztic and well done, though.

I love Gabriel's "We owe him a miricle" line. )
smeg1 chapter 3 . 6/23/2003
nice to see the tale from pris' pov, please do continue with this
BatThing chapter 3 . 6/15/2003
CriMson! CriMson!

Yea! You posted more! I am so happy! Loved the chapter all of it! The reader never really got to know a lot about Pris, but with your writing we get to see a little more about her than before.

Loved how she found the bible. ;)

Yea! Joe is included in this fanfiction? *dances around* Joe was cured? I never knew this. I know that at the end of Redemption he was walking around... in day light. Wow, feel a little silly. Cool, I never noticed that before.

I hope Joe gets a little more, and Zophie was there for a little. Yea! Cheers to this fanfiction. ~I am so happy!~

Hope for more, and a wonderful new chapter. Just perfect! I was all cheers when I saw you have it up and ready for us.

To bad about Vet school taking up so much time. But thank you for posting with all the crazy stuff you have to take care of. I really, really, really, think this is a great fanfiction! Hope for more!

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