Reviews for Conflicting Desire
DCI Gill Murray01 chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
please can you do a follow up for this story i'm desperate please!
LadyCoraCrawley chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
oh lord! that was brilliant, the end was perfect too! pls update soon i NEED it! fab job!x
GirlonaBridge chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
Yay! I care. You are on an updating roll lately missy! Not that I'm complaining - quite the opposite. :D
Gill is such a sweetie here, and really genuine and down to earth too. I love her moment of realisation, just "Oh" and so much in that little word. Now is Sammy's chance to show that he's nothing like his own Dad - I hope he doesn't disappoint Orla and Gill.
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
Aww yaaay a baby. Sammy will be happy :)
Didget chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
HEHEHEHEHEH LOVE IT!
Sazzy.x.x chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Argh I have tears in my eyes! That end bit was just..gah!
And these few lines;
"She was supposed to be getting married today.
And she was fantasising about her ex-husband.
Who'd just beaten up her son's girlfriend.
Jesus Christ." Are the best thing I have read in ages!
And silly Chris, he can't really expect her to want to get married after that!
Love it! xxx
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
An update. AT LAST. Haha just joking. A great update hunni. Trust Dave to ruin such a special day and poor Orla. She's Gill's now. Lucky cow :D
GirlonaBridge chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Gaaaah I didn't see that coming! Oh this is painful, watching them all lash out at and destroy each other. It's awful the way that happens, especially in families, but it's very true. Not impressed with Chris here - it's times like this that people show their true colours and his are seriously not good. I'm worried about Gill now, all this stress seems to be getting to her. In fact, fantasising about Dave is a brilliant way of showing how messed up she must be!
Still holding my breath for more.
CaleighWho chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
I better get more love for this review them ;)

It was such a good chapter! I really loved it, and I feel so sorry for Orla and Gill and Sammy, But not really Chris.. Or Dave! He's such a horrid man!

Anyway, I really loved this and I can't wait for the next chapter! xox
Sazzy.x.x chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Oh Daveee *unimpressed face* what are you doing to poor Gill! Bit of a twist as well, what with the sleeping wih him again! Loved the idea of the vicar being disapproving of the whole thing too. Fab updateee :D xxx
GigglingGirl chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Awhh poor Gill! This is so lovely! And written brilliantly, may I add. *talks to self 'you may'* I cannot wait to read more as it fabulouso! Sorry, feelin' my Italian quarter kicking in there. ANYWAY, good job kid! Xxx
SassyRaydorGirl chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
I have waited so patiently for this update. I'm dying to know what Julie's secret is :D
GirlonaBridge chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Oh poor Gill - "a complicated wedding to go with her complicated life" and more and more complications keep getting thrown in. Love Rachel thinking it's all quite funny, love Sammy (always!), Kevin stating the obvious, Andy actually being very reasonable, the vicar (so true to life) and I quite liked Chris getting all angry and defensive in that situation, although I can understand how that might worry Gill. Hope he isn't going to turn out to be another bad un.
I don't want to believe Dave, that Gill did... but I'm worried... aargh no - he's sowing seeds of doubt even in me!
Sazzy.x.x chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Oh my gosh...all the way along I was like 'aww' this is so cute...Gill and Chris are the best 3
And then Dave just comes in and ruins it! And "Janet and Rachel exchanged incredulous glances" ... loved that bit. Ps. This has to actually happen in s3...pleaseeee :)
melissapaigex chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Asdfghjkl! Asdfghjkl!
Don't leave us hanging for much longerr!

Stupid Dave! Hate hom so much! He seriously needs to be shot of something! Hasn't he damaged her enough? He is so annoying!

Julies so cuteee, trying to reassure her! I wanna know wat her secret is;)

Gill! Bless her little cotton socks! She was so nevous! Awww!

Chris is so cute as well, bless him! They need a real wedding in series 3! Just without Dave!

Well written! This was fab, cannot wait for anther update! You'd better not just leave It there!
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