|Reviews for A Midnight Chat|
| Mr. Jellybeans chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Short and to the point. That's good. And the writing style is okay for now.
Just one thing; please make up your mind, whether you want to write in past or present tense. The reading flow goes out the window, if I have to mentally correct every second sentence... I'm not trying to be a jerk here, but proper grammar and orthography is the least one should expect from a writer. It shows you truly put in effort.
And if you have trouble with it, ask someone to help you. There are lots of nice people out there, who'd lend a hand. :)
| mr grimjaw chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
this was sweet and nice i like this keep it up
| Sailordeedlit chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Ah this was cute. On another it was thrown off, I did not read the story summery until now if I had I would of known it was Zechs and Noin pairing and to at Relena and Noin pairing.