|Reviews for No Room for Two|
| Bon chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
| XxTwistedThornxX chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Let me start off by saying that this story needs more favorites, more reviews, more everything. I read this on a whim and I have found my favorite fic in the Pokemon category.
Not only was the story grammatically correct, the pacing was perfect, and the way you wrote the characters was phenomenal.
Cynthia was easy to sympathize with and I personally adore how you wrote "Cynthia wasn't a bad girl, she just liked to have her hair pulled." It made her likable from the very start.
Now Lance was a prize in himself. From the moment he made his entrance, he dominated. He was a strong character, utterly sexy, and exactly how a Champion should act.
Their encounter in the bathroom was hot without being overly explicit and that is a challenge that you conquered. The ending was perfect, as well, leaving the reader satisfied (if not letting their imagination run wild at the thought of Cynthia perhaps going to Lance later that night.)
You, my dear, are spectacular. Thank you for sharing this story!
| Shortchannel4 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
love kink stories like this
| TheOldRival chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
He... She... What?
That was a very good story, if not a little disturbing. Very well done!