Reviews for Toy soldiers
Deryn Du chapter 5 . 11/9/2013
Please update again! Brilliant fic! :)
MBP
Frostfire613 chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Man, I can't wait to see Cap's reaction to the fact that she's a girl. I wonder when the turning point in their relationship is going to be, it seems like it'll maybe take another life saving or maybe finding Joey for it to happen. But I can see why Cap is pissed.
Lukaheim chapter 5 . 12/8/2012
This is so good! I cant wait for the next chapter!
luciamel8 chapter 5 . 12/1/2012
Please Update! It's an amazing story and you have an immense talent! I can't wait for Alexa and Captain Nicholls to fall in love!
IWillNotBeSilenced chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
I cannot understand why this story only has 7 reviews. I'm serious, it's amazing! You write so realisticly and beautifully. You are truly talented, Never let anyone convince you otherwise!
-Abbie xxx
Stephanie chapter 5 . 10/4/2012
Sorry I couldn't respond sooner. Ah man, this chapter is one of my favorite. I could feel her fear and picture the emotions quite well :) She better not every apologize to him about that. Though she said she will never apologize, she never really directly said she wouldn't apologize for saving him. Stubborn she is. I like that though. I'm curious to be what will be the turning point in their relationship so they are at least..friendly..to each other. Though I guess both of them need to get used to each other first. Silly Alexa and Nicholls.

When he died is when I decided to read fanfictions about him. So thanks for providing that :)
Darn it, I say to much in my reviews now I'm in major suspense to what I got right :D -sighs- I guess I will have to wait and see.

Well my dearie, good luck in school, and I hope you feel better! I will eagerly await the next chapter! ;D

Stephanie
Freehorse chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
I love it !
Freehorse chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
So far I think this chapter has been my favorite, I feel like I can see your writing improving as you go along. In this chapter I felt like I could understand the main characters thoughts more easily and conect to them. Please keep writing and posting, I really want to know what ends up happening
Zepheira chapter 4 . 9/11/2012
So far I think this chapter has been my favorite, I feel like I can see your writing improving as you go along. In this chapter I felt like I could understand the main characters thoughts more easily and conect to them. Please keep writing and posting, I really want to know what ends up happening
Stephanie chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
Chapter four! Such an emotional chapter. I didn't expect to get the war ambush scene this close to the beginning but you did it so wonderfully. Basing on the movie (Oh man, the movie and Nicholls death scene was done perfectly. It was so sad and Hiddleston's facial expression made me want to cry...actually I think I did) I could imagine that is what his reaction would be. Her inner struggle was great and bring Nicholls into it was even better. I feel bad for her, feeling like a coward even though if she died the story would have too. I'm pretty stoked to see the hate/guilt mixed with a bunch of other emotions relationship take place and grow. And it's kinda sucky she is going to have to pretend to be a guy and pretend to have a limp at all times. No, no she can't be killed, there is no learning in that...maybe injured. Your quite welcome and I did enjoy this chapter as well. :) I look forward to the next chapter.

Until next time,
Steph. :D
Keep up the amazing work.
Stephanie chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
Wooosh! Mind blown! (I don't know why but wooosh is my mindblown sound effect) The ending was so awesome and personal! Addressing the readers was a great idea! I loved it!I know you addressed the readers in the beginning of the story, but it all brings it together now! Oh yeah, and that you add the "if you're wondering about the paged ripped out" part, that was really cool how you make it as if we were actually holding the book. I also like the name Halle for the horse, and I'm curious to why you decided on that name. One thing I appreciate about this story is that Alexia isn't all buddy-buddy with the Captain right away she maintains the proper respect she would have to give him. I also appreciate that she can't do everything perfectly write away! Not mary-sueish at all.

Also, I'm excited to see what happens when she goes into her...feminine monthly issues and how she hides all the wonderful crap females have to go through.

Amazing work! I'm starting to really love this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (Your system is pretty smart! Props to you for that.

I tip my hat to you, excellent writer.

-Steph
Stephanie chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
I like this story so far! I love how your character helps her brother and in two chapters you already start to see her good side and a few faults. I also like how so far you made Captain Nicholls out to be! Great job!