|Reviews for On Top of the World|
| Backache-usagi chapter 13 . 1/4
Was just too perfect
| Backache-usagi chapter 12 . 1/4
That made my cry again, and alot.
Man I fell in love with your writing
Ima go cry a little more now
| Backache-usagi chapter 4 . 1/4
I cried at the end,
Right before dash did and then I smiled
Then I read the 3rd to last paragraph and my expression dropped cause i had just done that...
(The whole tear &smile thing)
Another awesome chap!
| Backache-usagi chapter 3 . 1/4
That just happened..
| Backache-usagi chapter 1 . 1/4
HO-LY FUDGE 0.0
That first part, amazing!
The last part, epic.
That was just, soooo good!
| Wolfisis chapter 13 . 11/15/2013
awwww...I love this story.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/3/2013
This is a horrible place to end this. I'm sorry, but that's just my opinion. It doesn't feel finished.
| Chiyo Reikan chapter 13 . 8/20/2013
At first, in the beginning, I thought I wasn't... but I TOTALLY fell in in love with this story because:
1) The moments with and about Dashs' "dad"
2) The actions and reasons Danny had towards sex and
3) The moment that Jack went over protective father on Dash:
"Remember Dash. Shotgun."
"Yes sir." (LOL!)
Great Job :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/8/2013
ok so a little FYI im crying that was so sweet and awesome, worth every minute reading i love your working so please keep going
| Goddess of Monsters chapter 13 . 7/8/2013
Can't wait for the next chapters!
| Hot-Chocat chapter 9 . 4/28/2013
| KeshayaRock chapter 13 . 3/19/2013
Omg there need ta be a part 2 ta this cuz I want ta kno how they were in collage but over all this one wuz very very very cute I swear
| Just Will chapter 13 . 2/25/2013
Aww... while this ended on a pleasant note, I also wished there had been one more chapter and not only because it ended on 13. It was a wonderful story and very sweet. You did well on this and besides a few spelling errors I'd caught it didn't take anything away and it was great.
| I's Wuv Yaoi chapter 13 . 1/3/2013
Oh my gosh, I love this story. I love this pairing. I swear this story was really amazing and I hope to read more of your stories. (:
| Hikarru chapter 13 . 12/28/2012
Overall, this was such an amazing story. I was actually hoping that Danny would get prom queen, but it's okay that he didn't. And I also was hoping(in a very sad way) that one of them would die, just so the cute atmosphere would be disturbed, though that didn't happen and that's okay too. Great job and very well written. I enjoyed the character switch point of views every chapter. Keep on writing! :D