|Reviews for The Queens|
| CassInLove chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I need more. I hope that Leah finds out about Nessie and get's mad at Jake
| rocklesson86 chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
Did they buy him a car or maybe they got in touch with his bros.
| blckwaterforeve chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
| brankel1 chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
Love what he got?
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
Wow now isn't nessie such a desperado, and jakes the biggest jerkface ever. I don't see how Leah expects to date and trust that after everything, she deserves someone better, not someone who constantly wants to go sleep with some other girl no matter how much he claims that he wants to love Leah, that's just sad I hope it all blows over him and Leah finds someone else, because I am not liking this Jacob one bit
| JTCA chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
I am really curious, but I bet the surprise from the girls are the Jake brothers! :D
Update fast girl! :DD
| Firefly-class chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
I can't believe he slept with Nessie. Leah will be upset when she finds out, especially since they have been so demonstrative with their affection.
| JL chapter 15 . 11/18/2012
Wow Jacob is the biggest jerk ever! And I'm sorry but Nessie is not Leah's best friend at all. And how didn't anyone hear them. I really hope Leah finds someone else because Jacob is not good enough for her. Its time Leah finds out.
| THEPrincessx chapter 15 . 11/17/2012
I just got out of the theatre! Breaking dawn sucked smh! Ugh I'm so sick of reneesme! It's blackwater all the way! Thank god for fanfiction! You should really bring in another guy to get Jacob jealous! It's not fair he gets the fun and not Leah lol
| Shouldabeenblond chapter 15 . 11/17/2012
Sooooooo, i was feeling lazy and didnt want to log in. Anyhoo, MOTHERFUCKER! Goddamn Jake?! I'm just starting this story (not a good idea but you posted today and I couldn't resist) and I'm def hooked. How much more tiger woods could jake be? Leah, rosalie, and nessie? Please get tested next chapter. Is that what the surprise is? An at home std test? If so, best present ever! Be safe, jake, be safe. And nessie smdh. Gurlllllllll, you are getting what is most likely the best sex of your life and you decide to cry because you think he may be laughing at you? How fucking insecure could you be? Plus, when you come up to a guy talking about urges and shit, that is a risk you just have to take honey child. Of course he may get a lil chuckle cuz you want the dick so bad. Just suck it up and ride that man like you wanted to in the first place. Her crying was just weird. And the gotdamn nerve of Jacob Black. He must have the biggest cojones in the world to go and hug and kiss on leah while smelling like nessie's snatch in front of rosalie. Can you say death wish? Can't wait to start from the beginning like a normal person and catch up. Before I go I do want to repeat: std. Testing. That is all. Great job hun!
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 15 . 11/17/2012
Lol, your such a jerk. You would make Jake sleep with Nessie again, smh. Well I guess you figured as long as Leah isn't giving it up, someone will be. Well, in that case, Merry Christmas Jake. ;D
| CallyGreen chapter 15 . 11/17/2012
Well I don't think that Jacob should get with Leah now... But other than that this was an awesome chapter. Very smexy. Well done and pls updatey SOON!
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 14 . 11/13/2012
I liked this chapter. It was a great little moment between Leah and Jake.
I could always use a little more Blackwater in my life so I say bring on the preview. ;)
| Junebug33 chapter 14 . 11/11/2012
Love the story! :)
| blckwaterforeve chapter 14 . 11/11/2012
Loved this chapter!
You are doing an amaing job can't wait till the next one!