Reviews for The storm
Nile.Befall chapter 2 . 4/27
more it was awesome :D
Viova chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
Great fic!
I can't wait to read more!
Edward0Elric chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Please! I would love to read more!
haidogirl1406 chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
Haha Akio is jealous, if you ask me XD
Jisl Kaiser chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
Nice chapter, update soon :D
Kitty723 chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
U made my day SPECIAL!
Please write more Sakuma/Kidou stories,(They should tell Endou about their relationship,since he is captain) o_o i dont know
You have better ideas than i probally do,;D
Inazuma11Freak chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
Wow, am I really starting to like yaoi? Or is it 'cause people make such cute plots? Hahha! Oh well, love the story. Are there any next chapters coming? Love to read them.
AyasumiMamera chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
0/0
FUDOU! Why did you ruin the moment!
Teehee, I loved this chapter as much as the first one!
You're an amazing writer and I'm truly jealous!
Please update more Inazuma Eleven stories!
I'm your fan!
xoxo Mamera
AyasumiMamera chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
KYAAA!
OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!
I totally freaking loved it!
I can't believe this is your first fic!
It's absolutely amazing!
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Better start readig it now!
xoxo Mamera
Garfakcy-chan chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Aw! So cute! I'm glad to finally see some KidoSaku on here that isn't mine!
Kitty723 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
2 cute! PLEASE write more,thanks ;D
CassielT chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
OMG, I love you so much right now!
I've been waiting for a new Kidou/Sakuma Fic forever. They're so great how come no one sees that?
Anyway back to your story: I really liked it. Is that really your first time writing? Pretty good for that XP
You have a good writing style and I think you got their personalities. Espacially Kidou being absolutely oblivious about whom Sakuma was talking XD
But it would have been nice if you'd make it a bit longer. Than you'll be able to write more about their personal feelings.
But anyway I hope you write some more of this XD
Cass
HIATUS-ING chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
CUTE! welcome to fanfic!
You're good, hope to see more!
Eeqooeeoos chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
That was quick. But I like your pacing, it really gets me into the story.
This story is cute and the fluff... Oh the fluff really gets me, I have to restrain myself from squealing.
I don't have much to say since this is already good. Keep it up!