|Reviews for The storm|
| Nile.Befall chapter 2 . 4/27
more it was awesome :D
| Viova chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
I can't wait to read more!
| Edward0Elric chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Please! I would love to read more!
| haidogirl1406 chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
Haha Akio is jealous, if you ask me XD
| Jisl Kaiser chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
Nice chapter, update soon :D
| Kitty723 chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
U made my day SPECIAL!
Please write more Sakuma/Kidou stories,(They should tell Endou about their relationship,since he is captain) o_o i dont know
You have better ideas than i probally do,;D
| Inazuma11Freak chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
Wow, am I really starting to like yaoi? Or is it 'cause people make such cute plots? Hahha! Oh well, love the story. Are there any next chapters coming? Love to read them.
| AyasumiMamera chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
FUDOU! Why did you ruin the moment!
Teehee, I loved this chapter as much as the first one!
You're an amazing writer and I'm truly jealous!
Please update more Inazuma Eleven stories!
I'm your fan!
| AyasumiMamera chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I totally freaking loved it!
I can't believe this is your first fic!
It's absolutely amazing!
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Better start readig it now!
| Garfakcy-chan chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Aw! So cute! I'm glad to finally see some KidoSaku on here that isn't mine!
| Kitty723 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
2 cute! PLEASE write more,thanks ;D
| CassielT chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
OMG, I love you so much right now!
I've been waiting for a new Kidou/Sakuma Fic forever. They're so great how come no one sees that?
Anyway back to your story: I really liked it. Is that really your first time writing? Pretty good for that XP
You have a good writing style and I think you got their personalities. Espacially Kidou being absolutely oblivious about whom Sakuma was talking XD
But it would have been nice if you'd make it a bit longer. Than you'll be able to write more about their personal feelings.
But anyway I hope you write some more of this XD
| HIATUS-ING chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
CUTE! welcome to fanfic!
You're good, hope to see more!
| Eeqooeeoos chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
That was quick. But I like your pacing, it really gets me into the story.
This story is cute and the fluff... Oh the fluff really gets me, I have to restrain myself from squealing.
I don't have much to say since this is already good. Keep it up!