Reviews for Jaden Kaiba
D.J. Scales chapter 21 . 2/2
Nice Twist. Even so Glad to have Bastion in Blue at last.
tanithlipsky chapter 21 . 10/14/2016
duskrider chapter 5 . 9/25/2016
Hey dude I think you messed up as your Satellite Laser Balsam Fusion monster stated it gains 3000 ATK for EATCH end phase of the summoner of that card. It was 2 end phases (6000 ATK) before he was destroyed by Cyber End Dragon (8000 ATK due to power bond). Jaden had 4650 Life points before than meaning he would have 2650 Life points after that attack rather than losing to Cyber End Dragon.

Not saying this is terrible but you atleast need to add in De-fusion to the ending of this duel to return your 3 cyber dragons and negating the effect of Power bond to end the duel by attacking Mechanicalchaser first as he had 1850 ATK at the time meaning Cyber Dragon with 2100 ATK would destroy him leaving Jaden with 2400 Life points which the last two cyber dragons would be able to destroy with their following attack.

Overall its an ok story but I'm just not really into it.
Guest chapter 21 . 9/18/2016
Neat story you have here. However, be sure to check over your duels, and an updated summary that's simply not a one liner couldn't hurt. Update soon!
real spider chapter 21 . 9/19/2016
Will the next chapter follow bastion's victory or Missy's
Shadowjab17 chapter 2 . 9/18/2016
Traps have to be set one turn before activating.
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 21 . 9/18/2016
Getting awesome good can't wait for more
davycrockett100 chapter 21 . 9/17/2016
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 21 . 9/17/2016
Nice quick what if:-)
SweetAnimeLover chapter 21 . 9/17/2016
Nice can't wait for the next chapter take your time
Guest chapter 19 . 8/29/2016
Explorer Dragon wouldn't have won the duel, no damage is inflicted when it battles, ever. Also, you can't just randomly kill the dark door because you felt like it. There has to be a mystical space typhoon or something.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/29/2016
Please check your duels before you post them. Hours level 8 would stop the monster reborn, pinch hopper is an effect monster, and there's no point to some of the cards you put in their decks.
Guest chapter 17 . 8/29/2016
You can't attack if there's a swords of revealing light on the field though.
tanithlipsky chapter 20 . 8/29/2016
cornholio4 chapter 20 . 8/29/2016
Hope Alexis and jaden could get together in the future,cthink of the interactions between her and sero that would arise from it
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