Reviews for Flocking Movement: The Seventeenth
Elyis chapter 45 . 6/15/2013
How'd you come up with the name "Dua class Numia"? And if "Dua" is supposed to be something else other than english.
Addict to Fanfics chapter 44 . 6/12/2013
I'm a little suprised they trusted that he wasn't another clone after being separated like that.
izzie chapter 41 . 6/1/2013
I'm in love with everyone here! Especially hawk XD
hollownature chapter 41 . 5/27/2013
wow, three in one day? i am impressed. i am looking forward to the next chapter. i wonder where you will place Atlantis, personally i have always thought it was in the Caribbean (the whole Bermuda triangle thing is kinda suspicious, not to mention several different native american cultures have vanished into the Caribbean almost literally overnight.
Relel chapter 39 . 5/27/2013
Ohmygoodness! I had almost forgotten about this story! This made my day! But I completely agree with Altair. I still dont trust Lucy but I really enjoy her interactions with the others. Either way, I'm so glad you're back!
Hawk wing chapter 38 . 3/25/2013
that's right, you grow those balls and tell 'im des

I was upset when Ubisoft killed Lucy. I wasn't her biggest fan (no I didn't hate her either) but you know what, Des had a thing for her and I was rooting for the poor boy. So thank you very much for finally getting these two together...despite the whole synth thing lmao
izzie chapter 38 . 3/25/2013
Last two chapters were so amazing! Tense mannnn TENSE and a cute fluffy chapter yay!
Echoing Fantasy chapter 38 . 3/24/2013
Ah, and at long last the sacrificial lamb grows horns and fights back. I'm interested in seeing how the boys are going to fix this one - especially Altair, given he's the one who got yelled at.
digisammiegurl chapter 38 . 3/24/2013
Yep. Was wondering when Desmond would hit his limit.
phantomvamp5 chapter 36 . 3/23/2013
Wow, dramatic twist much? I was honesty expecting Altair to be all "She's not human, we can't trust her!" Nice to know he can go a few minutes without being a complete asshole to her. :) great story
Addict to Fanfics chapter 36 . 3/21/2013
So a synth... Like starting from scratch. You have doppelgangers who look very much alike but no genetic relation then add memories (experiences) which may be similar or very different. Like meeting someone from the other side of the world that shares your face but not your personal experiences. Kind of creepy but in highschool there was a student in the grade above mine and the teachers thought we were siblings. Got called their name by an absent minded teacher a couple times too... there was no relation between us.
Green Twig chapter 35 . 3/12/2013
Argh! I read both Flocking Movements and is itching for the next chapter, well written, well done! Need more!
Wivania chapter 35 . 3/11/2013
PLOOOOT TWIIIIIIIST! Damn this story is so awesome I can barely contain myself :D and yes. I... don't know how I can praise you more than I already do, so feel... very praised! Very much! Please :D
izzie chapter 35 . 3/11/2013
WHAT WHAT WHAAAATTTTT
izzie chapter 35 . 3/10/2013
WHAT WHAT WHAAAATTTTT
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