Reviews for Flocking Movement: The Seventeenth
gg chapter 41 . 12/3/2014
hawk. a bird whose terrified of flying. very poetic. nice ironic twist there. it's not surprising he's scared really. his soul hasn't been free to fly in centuries. if hawk can get his soul back, can his apple then be used on or against him like he wished des could use it to put him to sleep?
gg chapter 40 . 12/3/2014
ouch. lucy admitted she knew he'd lie to her. like the coming battle of atlantis he'll probably promise her that he'll come out of the unnamed alive. and she'll know that is probably a lie. i think des'll only ever ask one thing of lucy: that she survive. no matter what happens at the unnamed, lucy will keep her promise to him.
gg chapter 39 . 12/3/2014
good thing des has hawk waiting for when he and cain return to demeter. hawk is a good peace keeper because emotions don't cloud his judgement. maybe hawk can keep alt from killing cain for taking des to apollo. which leaves the door wide open for des to kill cain himself.
gg chapter 38 . 12/3/2014
i get where des is coming from here. but looking at this from alt's pov, i can empathize. des is screaming that he wants to be happy and if lucy makes him happy, so be it. des won't give her up. yet is alt thinking about what he gave up for the world? he gave up cain. his big brother. alt was happy with cain. but alt gave him up, mistakenly i admit, to save the world from cain. alt is wrong here about lucy, but i can imagine his frustration as he watches des not be willing to make the same sacrifices he once made to save the world. even to the point of sealing cain up alive for over a century. the one person alt wanted in all the world. not to mention that alt would and has died for des. the kid means the world to him, so the idea that des would rather have died is painful in a way all parents can understand here, i think. alt can't even think of des dead. atlantis and the unnamed should come as close as anything ever has to killing alt when it plays out with the stadalla. this is a messed up family. i like it.
gg chapter 37 . 12/3/2014
huh. lucy said the clone would kill her if he could, yet later on in fm you've said it's not that he hates lucy. since tiamat's intervention with the clone, will he be more open to lucy? like would he want her just like des has always wanted her? would d2 pursue lucy and maybe turn this into a love triangle? though i can't see lucy being confused about wanting the clone over the genuine article. another reason for the clone to hate des, that he's an inferior copy and the woman he desires wants the real des. (not forgetting the other men and women in demeter who are interested in lucy as she is exploring all of her options to figure out what she wants and needs.)
gg chapter 36 . 12/3/2014
hera said clones are inferior to originals and more likely to go insane. how does d2 not go insane? he's cloned from the greatest terrible things ever birthed on the planet. or did tiamat do something to stave off insanity? no wonder he hates des; for hera to describe him as a slab of meat with legs and nervous system and flawed. self-confidence issues much?
if synths always rebel, especially when they learn how they came to exist, what will that mean for cain's son? i have a friend conceived from a donated embryo whose genetic family was complete, but didn't want to destroy their remaining embryos. yet they didn't want their identities revealed to her, so that information is denied to her beyond medical history. she is very bitter about this. how will cain's son feel about his origins when he's old enough to understand? will he rebel against cain as hera predicted?
lucy is the saddest figure in this chapter. the flock is outraged that lucy was created to manipulate and deceive des, yet lucy was also manipulated and deceived all of her life. she's come a long way since then. she's more grounded and focused than any of the 'born' humans. cain needs to be honest with his son from the start about who and what he is. that he wasn't created to be a tool or the hope of two races. that he was created out of love, not greed and fear like lucy was. what a legacy she has to struggle with thanks to the proeathans.
gg chapter 35 . 12/3/2014
when hera told them all to write their "number" in their life's blood and ezio said to make something up because it didn't matter, I get the feeling that was a big mistake.
is lucy feeling very connected to hera here? they both have reason to want to see juno burn before fm is over. since hera was so intimately involved in making lucy and as close to a real mother as she can get, it would be interesting to see how much of hera is in lucy. on that note, it would mean she's as close to a mother as cain's baby boy will have, and her thirst for blood could be internalized in the baby. interesting challenge for cain if that's true.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
happy b'day, xazz!
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
Still wishing you an amazing birthday, Xazz, as it's not over yet! Keep going!
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
Xazz, have a marvellous birthday!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
happy birthday, xazz, and many more.
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
23 years young! have a gr8 day, xazz.
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
gentle smile for you. happy birthday, xazz.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
The greatest birthday gift was when you were born, Xazz. Happy birthday!
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
All my best on your special day, Xazz!
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