|Reviews for Flocking Movement: The Seventeenth|
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/19
did des ever have panic attacks after running away and living alone (spying ancestors notwithstanding)? or did he have panic attacks when dunc died and he was basically alone in his house on the farm all day, everyday? 'cuz kaley wasn't there is spirit, only in body? u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/19
des reaching self-awareness is cool. is that why you put Lilith into a cup of water, symbolically helping him reach more self-awareness that he was part angel on top of everything else he is? u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/19
why didn't the proeathans want all of the ai awake, xazz? i know several of them were ignored, like morpheus and mercury and pluto, or lost like Demeter and venus and hera, but wouldn't having all of them awake and functioning serve the proeathans better? u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/18
so like both jake and altair must be getting major deja vu here. firstly for entering it 900 years ago and losing kadar. now for the last time they entered a temple tunnel in new york and lost des. altair especially loses people he loves every time he swears to protect them. no wonder he gets torn apart. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/18
will des' glowing power kick in at the atoll structure? or at the unnamed? it seems to make him a bit sick, which would make it hard to function. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/11
i honestly had forgotten how big venus was in the story. she doesn't have these little talks with des much anymore in oottt. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/11
i wonder if the proeathans des dream shared with here were ilythians, and not adjatevs. they offered to help him with the adjatevs after they saved des from being hanged. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/11
maybe now that tommy is on the scene, des gets why they're all so protective of him. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/11
des has his flock and lucy back. he's got his angelic powers under control. he's taking on the proeathans. maybe he's getting better. but what about hawk? will he ever be ok again, too? u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/11
how did jake happen to get shot point blank? were they searching for des when it happened? u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/11
i've been looking at maps based on your description of where both the atoll and atlantis are and it seems they should be covered in snow by now, shouldn't they? since winter starts on the planet around september, longer for the most northern and southern extremes? u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/11
back to basics living at its best! proeathans don't survive as well as humans without all of their lovely, advanced technology. not so superior at everything like they like to believe. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/11
bet clay would be high on the proeathan wanted list if they knew how much he knows about them. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/11
how'd the proeathans come out of cryostasis without losing their minds? des barely lasted 5 years; never mind the 75,000 years of the proeathans. u rock, xazz!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22
Wow, wow! Just started reading this, Xazz, and absolutely love your work! Love how Ezio cradled his bambino close and made him an impossible promise: that Des was safe. No one is safe in your stories, Xazz! Least of all your poor readers hearts. Which you stole long ago!
Thank you, Xazz!