Reviews for Flocking Movement: The Seventeenth
Guest chapter 27 . 4/20
just curious- after oottt is finished, will your legacy chapters, if you choose to continue to share them, ever feature jake far enough in the future that he's like the older immortals? like jake said he knows in a few decades he'll completely forget what it's like being a vulnerable mortal and become as cracked as the others are? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 26 . 4/20
from the moment cain and lucy stepped back into altair's life, he never stood a chance. between the two of them not being afraid of him and killing him when he gets too out of line, altair just can't catch a break. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 25 . 4/20
the ancestors. cain. jake. clay. lucy. lilith and the other angels in their vessels, tommy's memories of eve. saturn. the proeathans. the AIs. even kaley and troy in your tincture what if. xazz, it's truly amazing how many ways you have found to resurrect the dead in flocking movement, one way or another. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 24 . 4/20
the irony here is that lucy is actually more important to humanity than des. like clay said, she is a pure human with no genetic ties to anyone. any child she had would be a boon to a sorely depleted population. des is connected to a lot of genetic lines, not to mention he has 16 proeathan bloodlines in him, so he's a bit tainted, for all that he's the stadalla. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 23 . 4/20
why did juno use des to kill lucy prime, anyway? alive, she was a better prisoner for the proeathans to dangle over des to ensure his obedience. thanks to juno, they were forced to create a synthetic version of lucy to take her place. was juno working on her agenda rather than the proeathans agenda? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 22 . 4/20
y'know, lucy's comeback was better than malik's. the only one that would kill me more would be a return of sarah hart. sarah and hawk forever! total Shawk fan here, xazz! u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 21 . 4/20
when the templars thought using the ancient objects to control humanity for their own good, i bet they never thought they themselves might be the ones controlled? I love how you turn game history on its head and find new meanings in old things, xazz. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 20 . 4/20
the irony of the so called god fearing city is that they have a stadalla there, as close to a god as the humans and proeathans were ever likely to get on earth, but none were wise enough to recognize that taking 'god' prisoner might be a bad idea in the long run... u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 19 . 4/20
i wonder if the battles at the atoll and the unnamed and the angels and proeathans killed there will cause des to lose his appetite again? bet cain would be able to get him eating again. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 18 . 4/20
that slaughter scene was brutal. sort of reminded me of saturn's attack on the proeathans. if these deaths crushed him, how will he feel if he loses any of his handpicked angels? ack! i hope his uncle john makes it! u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 17 . 4/20
on a bright note, if any of the proeathans manage to grab des at the atoll, he can just cause their armor to lock up with a touch. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 16 . 4/19
tommy would be crushed if he ever learned about his and des' first meeting. clay was right to protect this new life. it wasn't tommy's fault he came to be, anymore than angel lucy. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/19
wow, that was an awesome insight you made there, xazz. the proeathan farms work people until their death. like an assassin farm, working their assassins until they die fighting templars. assassins are just as brutal as proeathans. troy and andrew would not like that comparison. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/19
did des ever have panic attacks after running away and living alone (spying ancestors notwithstanding)? or did he have panic attacks when dunc died and he was basically alone in his house on the farm all day, everyday? 'cuz kaley wasn't there is spirit, only in body? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/19
des reaching self-awareness is cool. is that why you put Lilith into a cup of water, symbolically helping him reach more self-awareness that he was part angel on top of everything else he is? u rock, xazz!
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