Reviews for Flocking Movement: The Seventeenth
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
happy b day xazz. all my best for you.
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
Happy birthday, Xazz. Hope your every dream comes true!
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
This was a dark fic in the FM saga, and my fave of all. Happy birthday, Xazz. Only good things today.
gg chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
happy birthday, xazz. make the most of your day.
Guest chapter 56 . 11/29/2014
best birthday wishes yet, xazz.
Guest chapter 56 . 11/28/2014
Guys, flood Xazz with your love and best wishes. Happy birthday, Xazz!
gg chapter 34 . 11/23/2014
so could lucy's blood be used to renew the proeathan temples? her blood opened up demeter. it seems synthetic blood is just as potent as proeathan blood, putting lucy and cain's baby at increased risk if the proeathans realize the truth.
so is the nameless not of proeathan origin? des said when he raised atlantis the device didn't need his blood. is it older than them, maybe responsible for life on earth? if so, it's no wonder they fear it and want to control it. how is des connected to some artifact that may be older than life on earth?
gg chapter 33 . 11/23/2014
alt is so threatened by lucy. is it because he fears she'll take away the love of his family from him? des loves her because of lucy prime, jake loves her too. hawk and ezio are fine with her. alt doesn't seem to realize they can still love her, but have room for others. ever since he chose to leave cain, alt is scared to lose anymore love in his life. which is why i suspect atlantis will be the last straw for alt.
gg chapter 32 . 11/22/2014
lucy said in this chapter that the proeathans had to keep the clone away from her or he'd try to kill her. is it because she represents everything the clone can never have, so he'd rather kill her than let the real des have her?
gg chapter 31 . 11/22/2014
the ancestors may be the villains as you said, but they love des so much, maybe that is the redeeming factor of their lives? des makes them more human, and less like monsters. (duncan and des together would have grounded the flock firmly in humanity). the irony is that the most level headed, grounded human in the flock is the only one who wasn't BORN a human, lucy. ezio is such a mother to the flock, always ready with big hugs and cooking meals. i'm surprised he hasn't sought out ezio's home cooking in demeter. will they have one more big family meal, just the 8 of them before they leave for atlantis? will alt ever learn that des thought about killing himself in russia? i don't think des realizes how much fear alt has about losing him. atlantis must be alt's worst nightmare (which i imagine is alt waking up, drenched in sweat, dreaming he'd just been staring down at des' lifeless body.)
gg chapter 30 . 11/22/2014
hope those final words of des are not prophetic. when he said he just can't win no matter what he does, that didn't bode well for the future. for atlantis. for him. for his family. for lucy. for the humans and proeathans. could that mean he fails and the world dies?
gg chapter 29 . 11/22/2014
so i just saw cain's influence on alt here loud and clear. alt dismissed the people of gafsa, telling des they were already dead. the proeathans were always going to kill them. he's not going to try to save these people and endanger his flock. this is the lesson cain taught des in oottt. that's why des decided to leave the people in the mine to die. they couldn't save those slaves without endangering everyone. jake didn't object to alt's decision about gafsa, yet he was furious when des made the same decision in demeter. interesting. also interesting to see cain's been teaching these same lessons the younger ones for so long.
gg chapter 28 . 11/22/2014
if it wasn't for the fact that i know hawk pines for sarah as much as he's able, i'd say he's a better match for lucy than des. des is so messed up, and not as bright as hawk. hawk and lucy are a much better match intellectually. ah well. great friendships have to start somewhere. i know jake is her best friend as fm progresses, but maybe hawk can be too when/if he get's his soul back. wait and see. fm motto.
gg chapter 27 . 11/22/2014
des got a taste of the hassles of godlike status in gafsa, so he can probably empathize with lucy's challenges in demeter. actually, cain and the ancestors can probably all empathize; over time they must all have been mistaken for gods by primitive peoples. still, they all know the truth and stay grounded in reality. the proeathans, however, seem to believe they are gods on earth. they relish the human worship, but can't deliver miracles. only nightmares. sad.
gg chapter 26 . 11/22/2014
have to feel bad for alt sometimes. one thing cain and lucy have in common is that they've both killed him out of revenge. yet alt struggles to do the right thing; it just keeps backfiring on him.
since des is about to pick up his clone, the question arises: is his primary objective still to kill desmond miles? not to mention, why'd the proeathans make that his objective? unless it was along the lines of having the clone let himself get killed while travelling with the flock so they believed they'd lost him and not try to rescue the real des again. that would be a sad fate, being born to die. if that was the clone's sole purpose for existing, i can see why he'd resent the original des.
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