Reviews for Shinobi Rules
xXBlackDragonXx chapter 7 . 7/18
Your paragraphs are too long... Makes me dizzy attempting to read each word, especially on computer screens.
Mind cutting them down a bit? Much appreciated if u were to notice...and if ur going to be continuing this story.
LadyAlysanne chapter 18 . 7/11
I just read your whole story today. It is amazing and I hope to read more by you.
Fawkes930 chapter 18 . 6/21
Great Chapter and Story. I have to wonder what it's going to be like for Naruto to have all of Kurama in her. Will she have to start from scratch for controlling Kurama's chakra? Or will she quickly adjust to it?

And what's going to happen to Obito? And Gai for that matter. Things are really starting to change from the timeline Naruto knows of.
Kaede Kayano chapter 18 . 6/21
So heartwarming! Naruto has her parents now, and I'm crying. Menma is just a lucky lucky kid. Rin is kind of a jealous bitch. BUT I LOVED IT AND WISH THERE WAS A SEQUEL.
hulkiesmash chapter 17 . 6/4
Oh gods if the next chapter is not a chapter I'm dying, and crying
This fic is too good please don't tell me it's abandoned
I'm amazed by how good this fic is, it's so good
Damn it's perfect
Obito being brainwashed by the evil flytrap from hell, rin having a mental breakdown, everyone seeing from space that kakashi is so in love you can see cartoon hearts on his eyes every time he sees Naruto
The " good bye my love,I'm sacrificing myself kiss" was really appreciated, tho I suppose kakashi probably didn't feel that way, he just got her back and she was dying again
hulkiesmash chapter 16 . 6/4
Oh gods for a moment I thought naruto was suddenly going to be taken to konoha by the mei's (people committing treason to help naruto, an outsider, thats a trend i can get behind)
Seriously I thought that, and then I saw the momochi guy and thought "are they gonna all emigrate to konoha?" Because Haku's family is going, and if so is zabuza's the ship would be complete
good thing might guy, the guy that has an affinity for turtles is a jinchuriki of a giant chakra turtle, i'm hopefull they can become friends
hulkiesmash chapter 15 . 6/4
I keep crying like a baby, everybody I love is suffering but at least they're alive (if maimed, poor obito or tortured wich is awful)
The gen-ish romance is totally alright, holding hands and drowning in feelings is great
Never underestimate the power of cuddles and hugs, every interaction beetween kakashi and naruto felt natural, It was not rushed or unexplained wich is really good
The blushing interactions give me life, seriously I love their romance
I kinda feel bad that future kakashi didn't gave Naruto a chance but with how lovable naruto is I feel like the guy might actually had feelings for her, buried under guilt (because she's his sensei daughter, and the minato practically adopted him) and issues over their age difference along all the shit they're going trough, obviously
So whatever now is alternative universe Kakashi's time to shine
Ten points to kushina for using the uzumaki way of thinking for a good cause
I loved how badly minato reacted, I cried in that part, in most parts actually
Anyway I loved it all
hulkiesmash chapter 12 . 6/4
This is not crappy at all, like really, shit happens, romance-y shit, important shit
This is actually a really great chapter
Because kakashi admitted his feelings to himself wich is important if hes supposed to be in a relationship
I kinda feel bad for rin, on the other hand obito is gonna be ecstatic that kakadhi has feelings for naruto and not rin, wich is not perfect but good
Natsuki Scarlet chapter 18 . 5/20
Plot, characters , everything! Amazing! I really loved the characterization, and the plot is very interesting... Because of you, I've began to like FemNarutoKakashi! :D I really can't wait for the next chapter! I feel really bad for Obito.. :( Will he ever be the same?! :o I hope he becomes sane again..
Anyway, I hope you update soon! Take care! :D
dhh chapter 18 . 5/18
You LET rin off too easily! Was there even a HEART-FELT apology for basically being a JEALOUS bitch.

Also, didn't you say that Rin's mother died and WHAT trauma? She didn't go through SHIT like Naruto..EXCUSING someone's deplorable/disgusting actions JUST to placate the readers is BAD writing on your part!
ImaginaryPencil chapter 17 . 5/12
Stop making me cry! Please
ImaginaryPencil chapter 14 . 5/12
Crying so hard right now!
Kakashi lover chapter 18 . 5/10
This is sooooo cute. The conversations between naruto and minato were my favourite. Thanks write more;):D;):D;):D;):D;):D
yanchoco chapter 18 . 5/8
i cant say anything but i know exams in uni can be worst, hahaha.. hope you'll be update again and thank you.. this story really good!
rhizz17 chapter 18 . 5/5
Update please
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