Reviews for Mechanic
nerd in me chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
good story could have made it longer
LikeYouBelieveInMe100 chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
Lol o wow! Lol this was cute... Totally realistic by the way lol! ) lol nice job! And I hope to hear from you soon! Adios!
Vampwolf22 chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
Mindfreak101 chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
If your friend dies then I'll laugh lol. I think this chapter came out nicely. It's a pretty good ending and I think this whole story turned out quite well. Looking forward to the next one you write.
Mindfreak101 chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
Sorry bout the headache. The only thing I see is that it's slightly weird to distinguish thoughts and narration and I have to read a line over again. Still, you have great wording and nice sentence structure. A good chapter by its own right.
Vampwolf22 chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
Loving it as always! Please feel better soon!
Vampwolf22 chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
*swoon* luff you forever for this!
Vampwolf22 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Yaaaay! The blehs are gone! I luff you!