Reviews for For Charity
chariot82 chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
For your first, I'd say you nailed it. Very enjoyable.
Why do I think Miranda is going to end up owning Runway/Elias-Clark? Hmmm.
MiladyGirl chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
Smokin' hot! I love this so much! :D
Shazr chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
Talk about wanting & needing! We want & need more pleeease! Enjoying the story keep the updates coming. For a first sex scene it was just right. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
MIKA chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
loved it cant wait for more
MirandyGirl chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
I L. O. V. E. this so much it almost hurts! Please update soon and ignore what anyone says as this is a truly amazing story, also the way you portray Miranda is exactly the way I see her, that everything she does people don't see properly and she truly cares and is an amazing person... Plus who doesn't love Meryl Streep? :D
sarahdude chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
For a first scene is was ROCKING, you did good! I loved it! I like the pillow talk aswell, and cant wait for more!
LillyPheonix chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
Can we say FABULOUS?! I am very much looking forward to the coup and Miranda's revenge. As well as more Mirandiness. Great Chapter!
LP
Obsidiana402 chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
That was HOT! Loved the sex scene, it's hard to believe it's your first time... LOL... I'm really enjoying this story, you're brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter and for more Mirandy. Thanks! ;-)
TRACKERPUPPY chapter 6 . 8/31/2012
Good story love the way u portrayed Miranda & Andy. Looking forward to reading more soon. Tks for sharing.
canthearshit chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
I read the whole story in one go, I couldn't stop. I've read everything on the dwp-verse and it's rare to read from Miranda's POV and I think you're doing a fantastic job. I really appreciate that you're taking the time to build up the tension between them and letting them to know each other as individuals, so thank you for that; as much as I love reading the sexy times, I also like to read how they get to a poing when they're comfortable with each other and the story doesn't feel rushed. You did a great job with the twins too, I'd love to read more Andy interactions with them and some with their Mom and Andy. Thank you for sharing, I'll be checking for an update.
fantasyinmymind chapter 6 . 8/24/2012
This is a very interesting side to both women - I like it. More?
QuietMontana chapter 6 . 8/22/2012
more please
cegger57 chapter 5 . 8/22/2012
Just found this story and love it! This version of Andy is fantastic, i love the confidence. Thanks for writing!
iseelesbians chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
One word. HOT! Confident Andy is hot...that's all there is to say.
ohioisthebest chapter 6 . 8/19/2012
Just found your story. I love it.
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