|Reviews for Moments|
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/8/2013
The only critic I have is concerning the slang and the London use of the pickup line Liam used when he said toilet...You could have said the loo it's just a better associated word to British lingo than toilet. Seriously love this finish finish finish
| ForeverUnited93 chapter 15 . 6/9/2013
nooooooo! poor bri! please updatw sooon! i cant spell as it is 12:41 in the moring.
| katiedawson360 chapter 15 . 3/4/2013
ooops... bad liam! i love this story, please update it soon!
| FueledByChocolate chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Howdy there fanfic writer,
Just wanted to let you know that posting stories with characters who are real people is against the rules. Doing this puts your account and stories at risk for deletion.
You can change the names to something else if you wanted, so it wouldn’t be based on real people, but the story isn’t allowed at the moment and can be taken down, and your account could be banned for a while.
If you want to keep posting stories like this, you can do a quick Google search for places that allow you to post stories with real people. However, is not one of them, and if you continue to post chapters/ignore the fact that this story is breaking the rules (the rules you agreed to when you published this story) you will be reported.
Make sure you read the rules before posting and your account will be safe.
| Millie85998 chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
This is really good! Can't wait to read what happens next!
| zxdcfvgbhjklp chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
Just wanted to mention that doing a fic with real characters (Or, real people, if you prefer) is against the rules of the site and the admins have a tendency to pull down and delete any they find. They may also ban your account for a while. This would suck, to be honest.
There are ways around this: Move this to a fansite that is dedicated to One Direction, or change the names to people out of a book or TV show. That way, it isn't about real people.
This rule is in place to stop people sueing the site. If it is sued, it could get closed down completely. No one wants that now, do they?