|Reviews for Lineage of Dragons|
| fanatla chapter 31 . 3/12
ORIGINALLY A REVIEW FOR CHAPTER 32:
Well, I do not think this end was terrible, but I think it feels incomplete without an epilogue (I already told you this in a review in 2015)... there are many questions on the air about what did happen to the characters...
Who was firelord after this battle: Zuko or Iroh?
Also, did Zuko get his hands on the circus director?
What did happen with Azula?
What happened with the water tribe siblings?...
I would be so happy to know the answers to these and all the other questions inside of my mind.
I hope you can write about this in the future... in the meantime I will be waiting for your update on Come Marching Home.
| fanatla chapter 16 . 3/10
I've read this story about ten times and I've cried every single time I've read the scene where the two of them are reunited...
| fanatla chapter 11 . 3/10
I loved this chapter... their first "I love you", their first kiss...
I love your stories.
| en14-07 chapter 2 . 8/14/2016
hey, next time; how about placing the tag OOC, like.. anywhere?
It's totally out of character; even if he was broken I'd suspect he wouldn't show a little of his usual emotions.
| Anathemal chapter 32 . 12/3/2015
Nice :) beautiful story. I forgive you for hurting me earlier p
| Anathemal chapter 16 . 12/3/2015
I forgive you. Just a little bit. I'm still pissed off though. :(
| Anathemal chapter 13 . 12/3/2015
this chapter completely ruined the story for me, gg /
well written and really good, but this was it for me. ill try to read it till the end to recover it.
| silverblondhairedlover chapter 32 . 11/24/2015
Damm! Its soooooo good. I dont know what to comment, just it made me almost late to work. Its so engaging, i kept reading it last night waaay past midnight just for one more chapter. I haven't checked, but do you write something like a sequel or spin off storuy of this universe? will be so good to know what happen after the war.
| fanatla chapter 32 . 10/11/2015
I've just re-read your story and I think it's time to let you a review.
For being the first time you write, It's really a wonderful story. The way you developed Zuko and Aang's relationship is amazing, and the angst's amount is enough to keep the reader glued to the PC.
I really missed an epilogue to this story (Like in "The Monster That You See"), but I can understand that's a personal decision.
| potterbuncker chapter 32 . 7/20/2015
I know this was written a while back, but I have just recently started re watching the Avatar series, and I must say, that you sir have a gift with these characters. I was kind of sad, that Aang wasn't the Avatar, but you made it work. Thanks for sharing.
| RosesOnCream chapter 18 . 6/27/2015
I guess you could say this chapter had a lot of... AANGST
this is probably the best thing ive ever come up with and im sorry i was born someone please love me
| TigerDemonOwnz chapter 32 . 1/14/2015
| hoLLic149 chapter 32 . 12/24/2014
The beginning of this story felt a little quickly paced to me, but I still enjoyed it a lot! It was an emotional roller coaster, and I loved the way that Aang and Zuko developed together.
| AzucenaXshadows chapter 32 . 11/25/2014
Oh wow i was so close to the ending before i took a beak on this. Lol
Anyways this had been an emotional roller coaster and i loved every min.
Thank you for sharing this
| StarLuce chapter 6 . 10/20/2014
Awkward little romance! Like it!