lovely

the smut scebes are kind of ridiculous. was this written when the author was a virgin? definitely before any pregnancy.. no foreplay , an 8 month pregnant woman just gets on top and starts bouncing? no

very exciting sory.
i love it, can't stop reading to to bed

the author's writing has really improved from the beginning of the first story to this one, and got much better with next. so far thongs still feel a bit teen focusedyoung

I really enjoyed your story.

What happened to any dueling spells? Everything they learned in the DA? Looks like everyone is just using unforgivables or the few self sacrificing spells draco and hermione came up with. So did they take off the prison penalty for using unforgivables or what. And their skills have seriously eroded. Can fight death eaters during the battle at hogwarts but can’t take down a few death eaters and a reporter who went up against Harry Potter and won? How the heck is she staying alive at all?

I miss all the marriage law fanfic their was one of my favorite stories to read beside Dark and possessive Draco anyway love it

Fuck you author. I am sorry but fuck you
Well, let me tell you i ABSOLUTELY LOVE your work, cabw, summer with the dragon were soo amazing
Even this one
I really really love it, but well, if you haven't had stretched it like a bloody rubber band, it woild have easily been one of my top 10 favs and this the scene in this chapter, i mean... Seriously?
They are meeting after MONTHS bloody months
And you turn such a emotional scene in a funny one. I was soo prepared to cry my eyes out in happiness but then you try making it funny. I didn't even felt like laughing it just, pissed me off. I AM SORRY

well... FUCKKKKKK
This story is testibg my patience to no bloody extent. Honestly it would have been wayyy better if you woild have just ended it sooner
It's bloody irritating and trust me i am a very patient reader. But this one is REALLLLLLYYYYYYY getting under my nerves

oh my gosh draco wtf WHY DID YOU LIEEEEE ugh

If you haven’t read Manacled, The Fallout, Broken, Cawb, its great. But if u have read the previously mentioned, then don’t read this because you will find characters a lil immature. They are not exactly OOC but unsettling. Weird.

I love this story so incredibly much! Thank you so much for sharing this ️️

this was a pretty dark fic compared to the others I’ve read on the site, but I really enjoyed it. You showcased the hardships of war. I really loved the Draco-Teddy relationship. Sad to be done!

HEARTBREAKING CLIFFHANGER. I love vulnerable Draco

I definitely binged read this today. I read the first story and then got to this one and couldn’t put it down! There were so many gasps and “no ways” and other surprises exclamations! I love the way you characterized everyone in this story. I especially loved how Draco acted towards the kids. It just made everything go “awwww”. Anyways I don’t know how much more I can say about this but this is one of my favorite stories!