|Reviews for the infection has begun|
| xDeathTheKidx chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Fictionpress or Booksie is the site for Non-Fanfics. Another thing, when your writing, It's easier to read when everything is not huddled into two small paragraphs, especially dialogue, it gets rather confusing.
I would suggest indenting and following the proper dialogue story format. It would confuse less people as to who is talking...
Your chapter is really short, but judging from what I've read, I think the story line has potential, try writing chapter two taking my advice.