|Reviews for Olimars Story!|
| Day 60 chapter 1 . 6/23
Today I discovered what appears to be an attempt at humour. I'll have to show this to the ship...it's always looking for a laugh. Even if it laughs for the wrong reasons. Hoho!
- Captain ( not Caption ) Olimar :P
| ZPF chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Bad grammar, short 'chapter', I can barely tell who is talking, missing/uneeded punctuation, misspelings, and undiscribed OCs.