Reviews for Misfortune
Jacki chapter 16 . 11/17/2014
So cruel... Killing off the characters... BUT THATS GENIUS and saddening I was hoping a happy ending but I got everyone dead instead. Love and death are both types of writing and I'm glad you saved the dramatic part most of us weren't expecting at the end.
sharon chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
flora chapter 16 . 7/21/2014
FUCK YOU I can describe you in a few ways DIPSHIT ASSWHOLE HEARTLESS BITCH how could you make AMUTO die flora: *pulls out pistol * * starts shooting * shugo chara inuyasha swords art online fairy tail kuroshitshuji\ black butler casts pulls out BATTLE THINGS and KILL author although it was a good story but still how could you kill them go to animefungirl12 page 2 story's working on third one plus other 2 review and say flora suggested you THANX
Lemon Berry chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
OMG This story is so awesome and sad :'( Ikuto and Amu...wah... :'( Love all your stories!
AliceKat chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
"ikuto's dea- dea-" ... holy... s-...
"against his cold lips" -tearing-
"numbness" oh look... one of my tears fell...
"not the same as our laws" -trembling-
"you were the best thing that ever happened to me" ...more tears... even more...
"not without you ikuto..." this is where I start whimpering...

...this is why I don't like reading tragedies... now for some reason, most of the tears are coming out of my right eye O.O -sniffle- it was still a good story... -sad smile- I cried again when I reread my own review... -drags sleeve across nose- I need a tissue...
AliceKat chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
I can't help but giggle at that "story" ikuto's telling!...LOL XD okay so what I can say is, at first I thought she dropped the phone cause of ami and now, that I know the real reason, this is what I have to say, HOLY S-! O.O
AliceKat chapter 13 . 7/11/2013
O.O my glob! she said it! well, what I mean is... she told him to say it! eep! but uhh... am I the only one remembering the grandpa is in the house and stuff... like... a zombie kinda... meep O.O I scared myself this time...
AliceKat chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
holy s- I was right... and the grandpa is at the house... and the grandma? probably gone maybe... thinking about it... if her grandpa died, how was he at the house? or was it a typo and actually the grandma? I still feel like it's the grandpa... I just remembered something... I did something slightly like that when I was little... it's kind of a blur... but i'm pretty sure no one died... I hope amu tells ikuto... everything...
AliceKat chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
HOLY S-H-I-Z I GET IT NOW O.O SHE DID SOMETHING TO THE PILLS BY ACCIDENT! i'm guessing grandma or grandpa... probably grandpa? nah... either way explains a lot of things... about the grandpa... I thought of that too, nothing happened to ikuto, and first thing that comes to mind, IS IKUTO A GHOST! or rather spirit... NOOOO! -gaping in horror-
AliceKat chapter 10 . 7/11/2013
NOT AMI TOO O.O S-! O.O i'm kinda glad I prefer silver, fake or not, over gold, and right now i'm creeped out of my mind... i'm going to start to get even more.. what was the word? oh yeah! paranoid! that was it! I'M GOING TO GET MORE PARANOID O.O
AliceKat chapter 9 . 7/11/2013
"aw who am I kidding, even ami saw though that" lol XD oh yeah... animals can sense evil! I thought someone was gonna see him on top of her :3 HOLY S-! what? i'm honest about what comes to my mind! I don't blame amu, I'D BE SUFFOCATING THE CLOSEST PERSON NEXT TO ME IF THAT HAPPENED O.O then they would go deaf... this is getting creepy... and punished for what exactly? hasn't she been through enough?
AliceKat chapter 8 . 7/11/2013
ah, you gotta love ami :3 I wanna do what ami did to... one of my friends? :D it'd be awesome if ikuto heard or if ami told him. ami is so cute... please tell me she only went outside and that she's not missing O.o yay she was playing in the snow!
AliceKat chapter 7 . 7/11/2013
just thought of something... your allowed to skip school if someone in your family dies... if both her parents died, it would be surprising if she didn't go for months, or start being home schooled .-. I think... it's good her grandpa's there :) okay, i'm happy for the amuto and everything, BUT I CAN'T ENJOY IT WITH ALL THE TRAGEDY O.O well, I can't enjoy it FULLY :I
AliceKat chapter 6 . 7/11/2013
okay, I was hoping they figured it was the bracelet, but that interesting too, I didn't really think about that, and the thing with the bracelet, FREAKED ME OUT O.O is rima... avoiding her? he does know! I think! cheese! no im not being random! I can't say s-h-I-z so I somehow came up with cheese... I did think the mom might commit suicide... but still surprised... now what about her and ami? and i'm guessing those are sleeping pills...
AliceKat chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
I have a bad feeling about this "date"... -snicker- hehe ikuto wants revenge for amu... :3 I wonder why he didn't die of suffocation either... HOLY CHEEZLES O.O I honestly do not know why I said that... it was the first thing that came to mind when I shouted .-. anyway... now I know why it's tragedy.
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