Reviews for The Cupboard
leahk80 chapter 1 . 9/12
Nicely done!
Erika chapter 1 . 5/7
I enjoyed this a lot! Thanks for sharing!
moodysavage chapter 1 . 2/6
I so liked this! Very good flow showing the changes in how he thought.
fantasyinmymind chapter 1 . 10/8/2023
Good story. Liked how you laid out Dudley seeing things differently than what he had been taught.
xLynchiex chapter 1 . 5/27/2023
holy crap man, i love this. dudley and that long hard road realising it isnt normal or okay. and how used to it harry is, i think you captured him perfectly
SpiralAK chapter 1 . 5/21/2023
Thanks for writing this. Good characterization for Dudley and his parents, Dudley especially. I quite liked his interactions with Harry as well, the way his thoughts progressed in a fairly logical way. If it wasn't for the fact that he bonded with Harry at the end, it could've fit almost seamlessly into canon, but I still liked it as it is and I appreciated reading it.
lunaz chapter 1 . 11/15/2022
The slow awakening of Dudley to what his family have been doing to Harry was well done in this fic. Great job.
ElsieD chapter 1 . 10/29/2022
I loved this! Such a brilliant idea to have what the dementors did wake Dudley up. And your writing is so true to teenagers’ becoming adults, minds developing, questioning: Write on!
erstwhile-S chapter 1 . 8/5/2022
Dudley’s introspection and realisation about himself and his parents were well articulated. Glad I found this story. Thanks.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 1 . 8/3/2022
Wow. I liked Dudley realizing he and his parents were wrong this whole time. And good lord, the Wizarding world has its own governments! They pay taxes too! If Petunia bothered to listen to her sister when she talked, she probably would have found that out. How are muggles supposed to pay for the Wizarding world using their tax paying money if they don’t know it exists? Great fic. :)
guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2022
Beautifully done. Thanks for posting.
sarahsezlove chapter 1 . 1/14/2022
I really liked this.
NaniteSystems chapter 1 . 1/11/2022
Excellent- few stories show the dursleys undergoing character development.
morgannac64 chapter 1 . 12/31/2021
very good!
DJArla chapter 1 . 11/2/2021
I really loved this. I love the perspective shift over timeit’s always hard to adapt that something you once believed is not true. I’m all for a redemptive Dudley story and I think you did that in one of the most realistic ways I’ve read. Thanks for sharing
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