|Reviews for The Cupboard|
| ennui deMorte chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Awesome short story! Especially loved Dudley spending time in the cupboard, trying to see what it was like for Harry.
| RosalieBrandstetter chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Oh, I love this!
| olciak123 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Very interesting story :)
| Loonaticslover13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
This was so good and realistic, I loved this! I really think you could continue this; you've nailed their personalities perfectly, and your writing style is superb!
| Shiki105 chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Awww, bless. You know, I had this notion for a while of looking for a fic that dealt with Dudley's thoughts after the Dementors' appearance in Little Whinging. I wanted to see how it'd turn out and, I must say, this is an excellent piece. I wasn't even looking for it when I came upon it - I was just browsing the favourites of an author whose fic I'd read and liked recently. But seriously, I hadn't thought there'd be many people out there willing to write about DUDLEY's thoughts. Then again, HP has a pretty big fandom - anything's possible!
I might have to search for more fics like this. It was quite touching _
| LMI chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Please please please do a sequel!
| Outlaw-Lanaya chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
You took a character that people, including me, love to hate and turned him into a loveable guy. This was a great story.
| random chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
this is fabulous. your writing is fantastic, your character growth is flawless. the interactions between characters and within dudleys own mind- simply amazing. truly a master piece to be proud of. and possibility of a sequel...?
| TNM-Writer chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Damn, I wish there were more stories like this out there...
| Laura chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Another chapter...would be great
| aurora-inked chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
AWESOME MAGICAL WONDERFUL ARGHHHHHHH.
This. Is. So. Awesome.
At the risk of sounding clinically insane, I LOVE how Harry's written from someone else's perspective - And not just the Hogwarts people but from someone whom he spent summers with ... Other than the Weasley family. I love Dudley redemption fics (as someone else had already mentioned) but I especially love the fact that he left his old "friends" ... That takes some courage. And the little bit about the Dursleys' ridiculous spending; I sense a bit of trouble there. The moments in the cupboard were very well-written, and so was the alteration between annoyance and gradual sympathy between Dudley and Harry. Lastly, the interaction between Dudley and his parents - especially Vernon - were wonderful.
In short, I love this fic!
| Noelle chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I really like this story. You did a really good job of turning Dudley's view around but still keeping a sort of truth about his original character, and I'm really glad I decided to read this, as I'm usually not into one shots :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Great story! I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it!
| hiddenhibernian chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Noo, please don't stop there! Your Dudley really sucked me in, you wrote him very well; now I'd love to know more, like how he deals with Harry going off on the Horcrux hunt.
I also really like Dudley's gradual realisation of how things really were, especially the way you use the cupboard as irrefutable evidence that his parents couldn't have been right.
| Cookie05 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I love it
An amazing story