|Reviews for When Will He Give Up?|
| ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 12 . 10/25/2014
is it that Mason is coming home that day? Cause i don't remember them delaying him with the rain dance or anything else? If it is OMG Brady u better RUN 4 UR LIFE!
| LiveLoveLife13 chapter 11 . 11/14/2013
ha ha ha
| LiveLoveLife13 chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
| Trollface 2000 chapter 35 . 2/18/2013
I don't understand why you are getting so much praise, since the writing was horrible and the plot isn't even good. I honestly don't understand why people here call you a good writer, because you aren't. And you could use a lot of improvement and teaching. Like, a LOT. Possibly more than there is available on this planet.
| Trollface 2000 chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
Finally, you gave it to a Beta! I mean, it was almost impossible to read it up to this point, the grammar and spelling was so bad!
| snowflake chapter 35 . 2/2/2013
HI! I really trust you on doing the new story. You are a sooooooooo gooooood writer so I bet its gonna be really good. Good luck with your new story and thank you for this awsome story. By the way, sorry for my bad english, hehe!
| humanusscriptor chapter 35 . 2/1/2013
Me: *My disappointment face* Awww... you beat me to it! *Face turns serious, like Lanny* Not that I was gonna make a sequel or anything for that book. I mean, I was gonna do a...well... it wouldn't be titled that anyways. I was a poor, lonely peasant for the kings on Kinkow. But, who needs Kinkow when I got Lanada!
Lanny: Ata boy!
Me: Lanada will be the greatest island ever! And I don’t have to worry about running in to Zielsty. Lanny are I *puts hand on Lanny’s shoulder* are watching you…
*Two of us leave*
Me(turning around): But seriously, can I do my own sequel?
Oh, and there you are. 33 faves, 33 follows.
| humanusscriptor chapter 29 . 2/1/2013
| humanusscriptor chapter 25 . 2/1/2013
Brady, put on your thinking caps
| humanusscriptor chapter 16 . 2/1/2013
Well, it appears I'm not the only one who does the ...
| humanusscriptor chapter 13 . 2/1/2013
Too lazy to log in presently. Did Mickenzie just lay down the F-Bomb?
| humanusscriptor chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
As before, too lazy to log in right now. Brady's just scored some big man points by asking her out.
| humanusscriptor chapter 3 . 2/1/2013
Too lazy to log in right now. Well picked title for the chapter.
| Yummy42 chapter 35 . 1/30/2013
Haha u know what i just realized? That u ended this story Exactly four months after you first published this!
| Den Blue chapter 35 . 1/30/2013
I can't wait for the sequel! Oh, and the cover picture is really awesome.