Reviews for When Will He Give Up?
TaylorSwift100 chapter 11 . 11/14/2013
ha ha ha
TaylorSwift100 chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Trollface 2000 chapter 35 . 2/18/2013
I don't understand why you are getting so much praise, since the writing was horrible and the plot isn't even good. I honestly don't understand why people here call you a good writer, because you aren't. And you could use a lot of improvement and teaching. Like, a LOT. Possibly more than there is available on this planet.
Trollface 2000 chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
Finally, you gave it to a Beta! I mean, it was almost impossible to read it up to this point, the grammar and spelling was so bad!
snowflake chapter 35 . 2/2/2013
HI! I really trust you on doing the new story. You are a sooooooooo gooooood writer so I bet its gonna be really good. Good luck with your new story and thank you for this awsome story. By the way, sorry for my bad english, hehe!
humanusscriptor chapter 35 . 2/1/2013
Me: *My disappointment face* Awww... you beat me to it! *Face turns serious, like Lanny* Not that I was gonna make a sequel or anything for that book. I mean, I was gonna do a...well... it wouldn't be titled that anyways. I was a poor, lonely peasant for the kings on Kinkow. But, who needs Kinkow when I got Lanada!
Lanny: Ata boy!
Me: Lanada will be the greatest island ever! And I don’t have to worry about running in to Zielsty. Lanny are I *puts hand on Lanny’s shoulder* are watching you…
*Two of us leave*
Me(turning around): But seriously, can I do my own sequel?
Oh, and there you are. 33 faves, 33 follows.
humanusscriptor chapter 29 . 2/1/2013
*audience claps*
humanusscriptor chapter 25 . 2/1/2013
Brady, put on your thinking caps
humanusscriptor chapter 16 . 2/1/2013
Well, it appears I'm not the only one who does the ...
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humanusscriptor chapter 13 . 2/1/2013
Too lazy to log in presently. Did Mickenzie just lay down the F-Bomb?
humanusscriptor chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
As before, too lazy to log in right now. Brady's just scored some big man points by asking her out.
humanusscriptor chapter 3 . 2/1/2013
Too lazy to log in right now. Well picked title for the chapter.
Yummy42 chapter 35 . 1/30/2013
Haha u know what i just realized? That u ended this story Exactly four months after you first published this!
Den Blue chapter 35 . 1/30/2013
I can't wait for the sequel! Oh, and the cover picture is really awesome.
Codex chapter 35 . 1/29/2013
Post the sequel soon.
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