Reviews for love story from the school yard
Banna-nannas chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
You have a lot of cute ideas and I'd love to read them, but I'll be honest, it's very difficult to read your stories without punctuation. Han and Leia stories are my favorite, so you see, I want to read these. But without periods, commas and breaks in paragraphs, I spend more time trying to figure out what you're trying to say instead of being able to enjoy your hard work.