Reviews for Hurting
Lyli Salvatore Volturi chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
poor Victoria
Even the most cold persons in the world, have a heart
Kageyjay chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
This made me shiver! I like it a lot anyway!
megan chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
i liked this however i think you need to go into a bit more depth with your characters emotions and play more to up the tragedy as there is fairly limited expression of sorrow. you could extend this by letting some sort of flashback occur of times together however as a one shot this is good because it is concise and to the point the only thing is that it is very short and there isnt much new added to what was already known to the story. good work keep it up and next time write one that is longer maybe? thanks i enjoyed it.
RedrumCarnie95 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Excellent One-shot. I liked the nomad vampires, why did they all have to die :(