|Reviews for WITNESS|
| PastOneonta chapter 14 . 6/22
What a brilliant ending! That is definitely the ring the crooked cops were looking for. We're left uncertain whether/not Neal goes back to the statue for it so we can make our conclusions.
I enjoyed this. Parts were heartbreaking, particularly Neal's memories of his mother and his silence. I loved his drawings that told a story of the life he once had with a mom who is now gone. I was pleased Peter took him back to the apartment for closure and to pick up his art. Thanks to Peter and El Neal gained a new life filled with their love and a bright future. Thanks for writing.
| Ihatechoosinganame chapter 14 . 5/15
Really good story
| JimChou chapter 14 . 2/28
This story was really insightful and amazingly well-written. And the end was so true to the show! You pictured Peter as a very nice daddy, patient, caring and also intent to give his son a good education without being harsh on him. This is so true to the spirit of the show. Excellent. And I love the film with Harrison Ford as well!
| WhiteFang001 chapter 14 . 1/2
Ahahaha - I loved the ending!
Of course Neal never stops :D
| Nerdgeekflower chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
(have an account with that name way to lazy to log in) I don't normally review or comment at all. But you almost made me cry. I actually still might and I had to scroll right up to the top to see 'complete' because I would not handle it well if this left me hanging! before I keep reading I wanted to say something because I know that I would want to know if my writing invoked these emotions. SO um yeah. great job.
| marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 2/15/2015
Most people put more thought into it before they adopt why are they thinking of blotting if they thinking of running away
| 00-night-eyes-00 chapter 14 . 6/27/2014
| AoiLegend chapter 14 . 12/20/2013
Wow this story was amazing! I almost cried when Neal first warned Peter to watch behind him and called him daddy. This was so cute! Thankyou!
| Lawlessness45 chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
The end of this chapter made me cry. Silly, I know, but it stirred up some emotion for me. I found out about a year ago I can't have kids, and El just crying at the image of Peter holding Neal... was terribly lovely. Painfully beautiful. Of course, I'm probably inserting entirely too much of my own emotion in to the story, but, I'd like to imagine that this scene could play out in my own life. Thank you. It's lovely.
| Rehabilitated Sith chapter 8 . 8/18/2013
| CaskettLover1969 chapter 14 . 4/26/2013
I just finished reading your story and I was sad that it is over. I so loved little Neal and his connection to Peter.
You wrote the story awesomely! It was so well invented and Neal was even in character, drawing all about his thoughts and having such a great mind and smartness.
You said it was a dark story but I dodn't get scared at all because you wrote Peter so great that I was sure he wouldn't let anything bad happen to little Neal. The bad guys where put away fairly quick so I didn't have any worrys that it was over the minute Peter found Neal, and "hearing" Neal call out to Peter was sooooo beautiful!
How you made Peter going with neal to the old apartment was really a wonderful idea to bring Neal back into talking and realizing that his momma won't come back.
I really love kid!Neal, can't get enough.
| Lunar191 chapter 14 . 4/5/2013
This was absolutely wonderful. Neal's such an adorable little six year old! And this chapter was absolutely brilliant. I'm kinda happy Neal's still Neal from the show and interested in forgeries and the like. Also, I love how he's still about to meet June and the how you tied in the ring on the statue. Thank you for the great story! :D
| anina613 chapter 14 . 11/27/2012
Loved it loved it loved it. Did I mention that I loved it? The end was SO perfect btw! While I was reading it I was hoping we'd see Neal grown up and you did it! Thank you so much! :D
| DreamingSkies chapter 14 . 10/29/2012
T_T This story was so beautiful it made me cry. Neal's innocence and love that he shared with his momma was so touching! Please post more soon!
| ghostdolly chapter 14 . 9/24/2012
LOL! Just found and read the whole thing in one go! I surprise even myself *pretty smug*
Poor Peter and El. Eleven years with Neal must have all their dark hairs turned silver by now XD Suspended again?! hahahahahahaha! Oh, my father would have spanked him until he got red tomatoes for buttocks Hahahahahahahaha!
I enjoyed this story very much. Thanks for sharing it with the rabid fans!