|Reviews for Wooden|
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Great story! I particularly like the second scene and also Moody's reaction to seeing an ajar door.
Two typos through: “They child, that kid, god – what a poor thing.” “Their child”
“His parents battles, not quite won, not quite lost, and he couldn't imagine a damn way this kid wouldn't want to get his vengeance.” “His parents' battles”
“He thought of that kid, that poor kid, with parents madder than a couple of nifflers in Gringotts” this is a great simile.