|Reviews for Wooden|
| Galeana chapter 1 . 6/30
Beautifully written. I always thought of Mad-eye as rough, grizzled, and not entirely sane, but you've provided a voice to his character in a way I've never seen before. At first, I thought you were talking about the Potters, but the initial ambiguity actually gave the story depth. I especially loved the last section and the way he sort of quietly retired, which I think is exactly what Moody would have done. Great job.
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Great story! I particularly like the second scene and also Moody's reaction to seeing an ajar door.
Two typos through: “They child, that kid, god – what a poor thing.” “Their child”
“His parents battles, not quite won, not quite lost, and he couldn't imagine a damn way this kid wouldn't want to get his vengeance.” “His parents' battles”
“He thought of that kid, that poor kid, with parents madder than a couple of nifflers in Gringotts” this is a great simile.