Reviews for Permafrost
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12
Enjoyed the character sketch. You put ASR's reaction to the terrace scene in a nutshell. Eagerly waiting to see how Arnav will revive and take over ASR eventually.
priya chapter 1 . 3/18
wowww it was spot on!
vini.doe chapter 1 . 1/17
This is more of an analysis of what happened on the show and how he must have felt rather than his perspective per say. As a discussion point or even a narrative - it's ok but as a piece written specifically for Arnav or about him .. as the tagline suggests "A look into the workings of Arnav Singh Raizada's heart." it is a little less than great. As a writer you may want to read it yourself and look at it objectively and find the answer to "What was the purpose of the writing and did you meet it?"
saraswathi chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Good .
Shefali chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
you have a god-given gift ...a talent...for writing. Please do not stop on any account. I am waiting eagerly for your next masterpiece...this surely was one :)
Shefali chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
NICE please continue
Labyrinth89 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Hey, you know, i was getting so happy that ek hazaaron mein had a fanfic and iss pyar didn't on , because iss pyar already has tons of good writers and i'm a bit biased towards ek hazaaron mein and virman cause iss pyar while it is at times adorable also sometimes drags and can make thew viewer feel frustrated, like a few months ago when viewers started leaving the show, but i came across this. And i was there staring at the screen with my mouth open. It was reakin' awesome! and it was written so well...loved how you portrayed ASR's thoughts and eelings towards life and a certain Khushi Kumari Gupta. (Since their getting married again, soon-to-be singh raizada.) Anyways, i love love loved it. keep up the good work.
P.S. is this a one shot?

Labyrinth89 xOx
Eliminator Forum chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Wow! I've never watched this show but awesome work.

BTW, are you an Indian?